Monday, 16 October 2017

Example of "" for Animal Farm test paragraph

"fell naturally upon the pigs" (9)

The job of organizing all of the other animals fell upon the pigs.
PLAGIARIZING, COPYING

The job of organizing all of the other animals "fell upon the pigs".(9) BETTER, STILL NOT RIGHT

The job of organizing all of the other animals "fell naturally upon the pigs".(9) OPTION 1

The job of organizing all of the other animals "fell naturally ... upon the pigs".(9) OPTION 2
The job of organizing all of the other animals "fell ... upon the pigs".(9) OPTION 2

... ellipsis , shows that words have been removed

...... NOT ENGLISH

... ellipsis


"very round cheeks, twinkling eyes, nimble movements and a shrill voice" (9)

Squealer was a pig that had "very round cheeks, twinkling eyes, nimble movements and a shrill voice" (9) TOO LONG 3-4 words

Squealer was a pig that had "very round cheeks, twinkling eyes, nimble movements and a shrill voice" (9)

Squealer was a pig that had "twinkling eyes ... and a shrill voice" (9) MOST IMPORTANT POINTS

Still have to be grammatical

Squealer was a pig that had "twinkling ... voice" (9) XXXXXXXXX HAS TO BE A SENTENCE

Squealer was a "brilliant talker"(9) who had the ability to trick the other animals with his complicated vocabulary.

He was "very persuasive"(9) when he spoke to the animals on the farm.


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