SV
The guards acted badly/cruelly toward the prisoners.
COMPOUND
The guards weren't real guards, but they began to feel like real guards.
SV , SOBA SV.
SOBA so or but and
FANBOYS
Nothing much happened for the first day, but then the situation started to get intense.
DEEPER LEVEL ; semicolon
The guards weren't real guards; they began to feel like real guards.
Transitional Words
The guards weren't real guards; however, they began to feel like real guards.
ALTERNATIVE
The guards weren't real guards. However, they began to feel like real guards.
COMPLEX
because if when
WtC p41 after as before until when while because since although even though whereas while if
The prisoners revolted/fought against the guards because they were being mistreated.
Because the prisoners were being mistreated, they revolted/fought against the guards.
SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX- every sentence, every time.
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