Wednesday, 30 September 2015

EF7/ E10 "Buying" sentence combining

Buying
They were shopping for a gift. KERNEL
They were shopping for a gift for their mother.
France and Monica saw a display of antique, refinished furniture in the mall.

France and Monica were shopping for a gift for their mother, and they saw a display of antique, refinished furniture in the mall.

France and Monica were shopping for a gift for their mother when they saw a display of antique, refinished furniture in the mall.

When/ While France and Monica were shopping for a gift for their mother, they saw a display of antique, refinished furniture in the mall.

France and Monica, who were shopping for a gift for their mother, they saw a display of antique, refinished furniture in the mall.

HIGH QUALITY SENTENCES
2.      One particular chair caught their eye and the chair gave them an idea.
One particular chair which caught their eye gave them an idea.
One particular chair which caught their eye gave them an idea.

3.      They decided to look for a chair to refinish because their mom liked antiques.
Their mom liked antiques, so they decided to look for a chair to refinish.
Their mom liked antiques; therefore, they decided to look for a chair to refinish.

4. They looked in some shops on a side street not far from the mall, and they found two delicate chairs that they knew would look super in the family breakfast nook.
As/ After they looked in some shops on a side street not far from the mall, they found two delicate chairs that they knew would look super in the family breakfast nook.
After they looked looking in some shops on a side street not far from the mall, they found two delicate chairs that they knew would look super in the family breakfast nook.
5.      The price was reasonable, so they bought both chairs, and as they left, they were talking excitedly about how to restore them.

The price was reasonable, so they bought both chairs, and they left, talking excitedly about how to restore them.

As/ Because the price was reasonable, they bought both chairs; as they left, they were talking excitedly about how to restore them.

As/ Because the price was reasonable, they bought both chairs. As they left, they were talking excitedly about how to restore them.

The cat fell off the roof; amazingly, he was unhurt. ; linked closely
The cat fell off the roof. Amazingly, he was unhurt.

They bought both reasonably-priced chairs. As they left, they were talking excitedly about how to restore them.





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