Wednesday, 30 September 2015

EF6 sentence combining work

The object looks long. KERNEL
The object looks thin.
The object measures about 8 inches in length.

The object which measures 8 inches in length looks long and thin.
The object looks long(a), thin(a) and measures(v) about 8 inches in length.
The object looks long and thin and measures about 8 inches in length.
The object which looks long and thin measures about 8 inches in length.
The object looks thin and long as/because it measures 8 inches in length.
The object looks thin and long, and it measures 8 inches in length.
The long, thin-looking object measures about 8 inches in length.

2. The object has many flat sides, but it appears rounded with a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch.
The object which has many flat sides appears rounded with a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch.
The object, that appears rounded, has many flat sides and a diameter which measures about 1/8 inch.

The object, measuring about 1/8 inch in diameter, has many flat sides but appears rounded. APPOSITIVE

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