Wednesday, 7 August 2019

EF5/6 Essay review

Five-paragraph essay

Paragraph - expand it to an essay

writing prompt - question


PREWRITING
STEP 1
Read the prompt carefully
STEP 2
Brainstorming, make a list, mindmap
STEP 3
Organize your ideas

WRITING
STEP 4
Write the rough draft (first copy)
STEP 5
Proofread and edit - basic sentences, punc, vt, vf RO, frag
STEP 6
Write a good copy.  Pass-in the rough copy. It doesn't have to look beautiful. As long as it is legible (readable), it is OK.

EF5/6 - 2 hours, plenty of time
Eng12 - 30m

Repeat and Restate (same meaning, different words)


FIVE-PARAGRAPH ESSAY
Introductory paragraph
- grabber (optional)
- Thesis statement
- preview of three points

Body paragraphs
1. Topic sentence
-supporting sentences
2.Topic sentence
-supporting sentences
3.Topic sentence
-supporting sentences

Concluding paragraph
-restate Thesis statement
-restate the three points
-End with a clincher (optional)


WRITING PROMPT: Good ways to make new friends.

INTRO
Grabber (funnel)- new immigrants - lonely process, depressed, isolated
TS - new friends very important
PREVIEW -3 ways: 
MINDMAP, BRAINSTORM, LISTING 

Tuesday, 6 August 2019

EF5/6 Essay


5 paragraphs
three body paragraphs are balanced , about the same length



Discuss grabbers-
Some example of grabbers
-general to specific statement -funnel
-short anecdote (personal story), as discussed last class, personal connection
-historical reference
-question (answered by thesis statement)
-relevant quotation by famous person
-relevant idiom from any language



An essay is a balance between information and repetition.
Information is given three times - Intro, Body, Conc


EXAMPLE ESSAY TOPIC:
Why did you come to Canada?

Brainstorm 3 ideas - keywords
1. education - 1. 2. 3.
2. freedom? - 1. 2. 3.
3. work - 1. 2. 3.
4. safe - 1. 2. 3.
5. natural environment - 1. 2. 3.

Pick your best three points. Write a paragraph for each.

Body paragraphs should be balanced and parallel in their structure.




EF5/6 Essays

essay - very important

different styles of essays - narrative, decriptive, process (teach), persusaive essay, compare/contrast (very important for higher-level academic)

BASIC MODEL 
- five-paragraph essay
- academic essay
- 3*5 essay
- IKEA essay - good solid, basic essay, not fancy


essay - French "to try"
try to say what you want to say in the best way you can

Three sections:

INTRODUCTION
Introductory paragraph
- Grabber

- Thesis statement
- Preview of 3! points

BODY
3 body paragraphs

1.TS
-support sentences
2.TS
- support sentences
3.TS
- support sentences

CONCLUSION
Concluding paragraph
Restate the Thesis statement, the three points
End with a clincher

WtC p 56-57 560w
Grade 12 Provincial exam - essay 250-300w
We are not writing a book. Longer is not better.
Short and concise is the goal. Well-organized is the goal.

WtC p56
Man's Best Friend

Topic sentence - dog, relation with humans, 3 types
clear, specific, interesting

Body sentences
1. working dogs
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2. sports dogs
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3. companion dogs
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paragraph - topic sentence
essay - thesis statement ('idea')
SAME THING

violin or fiddle

WtC p58
Paragraph to Essay diagram












EF5/6 Missed quiz or test

Make up day will be Thursday. Last hour of Wednesday.

If you missed a quiz or test, let me know in writing by end of class tomorrow. A short handwritten note will be fine.
Or, you send it by email: ahaley@vsb.bc.ca

DEADLINE: Wednesday 12pm

If you have a low score and would like to rewrite, you can rewrite one.

You let me know.




EF5/6 What I look for in a paragraph

What I look for in a paragraph.

1.How does the paragraph look on the page?
format
margins
doublespace
black or blue pen
page oriented
indent
length

2. Is there a topic sentence that refers to the question?

3. Quality of sentences
simple, compound complex
verb tense
verb form
punctuation
sentence fragments
run-on sentences

4. Is the paragraph organized?
Do the support sentences relate to the topic sentence?



Friday, 2 August 2019

EF5/6 Idioms


-Strike while the iron is hot
-Opportunity knocks

-six of one, a half-dozen of the other - both ok
-I am on the horns of a dilemma- both bad 
-He is between a rock and a hard place  -difficult to choose, no clear answer

-a hare-brained idea
-a hair-raising story
-Don’t split hairs

-bystander 
-onlooker
-rubbernecker

-Get there ahead of time
-I made it in the nick of time 
-I passed by the skin of my teeth                 

-I wasn’t born yesterday
-Don’t try to pull the wool over my eyes
-They saw me coming
-I paid through the nose
-I fell for it hook, line and sinker

-hit the roof 
-hit the hay
-hit the sack
-hit the road
-hit the books
- hit the library/gym
-You hit the nail on the head.
 -see eye to eye
We see eye to eye about raising kids.
We don't see eye to eye about legalized marijuana.

-let the cat out of the bag 
-spill the beans

simile- comparison between two things using the word 'like' or 'as'
-hungry as a bear 
-crazy as a loon 
-happy as a lark
-cool as a cucumber 
-busy as a beaver/ bee
-quick as a wink 
-crazy like a fox
-nutty as a fruitcake
-free as a bird
-poor as a churchmouse


-It’s on the house 
-it's on me
-it’s my treat

-What goes around, comes around. 
-You reap what you sow
-You made your bed, now lie in it.
-spring chicken
-past its prime 
-long in the tooth 
-on its last legs 
-over the hill
-My car kicked the bucket

-out of the frying pan, into the fire 
-Your goose is cooked
-You’re in hot water
-You’re off the hook

-He’s sitting pretty
-She’s living on Easy Street

-I got it straight from the horse's mouth
-Don’t look a gift horse in the mouth

-Hold your horses
-You’re dead on
-Don’t flog a dead horse

-Bite off more than you can chew.
-I’m keeping my head above water -My plate is full
-It’s on the back burner

-I have a mind like a sieve 
-It slipped my mind
-in one ear and out the other

-make small talk
-chit chat
-chew the fat

-I have had it (up to here).
-I’m fed up.
-I’m sick and tired.
-see eye to eye

-heart in your throat
-heart sinks/ hit the floor

-Don’t be wishy washy
-You can’t sit on the fence
-Don’t beat around the bush
-bite the bullet

-take home pay 
-paid under the table

-I talked until I was blue in the face 
-She talked my ear off
motor mouth

-few and far between
-one in a million
-a dime a dozen

-in a jiffy
-in a nutshell  
-To make a long story short. 

-She is burning the midnight oil 
-He is burning the candle at both ends
-He wants to catch a few zs
-He’s going to crash on the couch
-fast asleep
-sound asleep

-know the ropes
-pull a few strings
-card up my sleeve

-talk behind your back
-I have a bone to pick with you
-Let sleeping dogs lie
-bite my tongue

-your guess is as good as mine
-up in the air

-out to lunch

-stay on the straight and narrow

-barking up the wrong tree

-dog days of summer

-Jack of all trades

-to a fault

-a baker's dozen

-He got up on the wrong side of the bed

-neither here nor there

 -busybody

-stick out like a sore thumb


-Go with the flow
- an easygoing person
- make waves

EF5/6 Advice columnists

Give some advice.
advices XXX uncountable
She gave me some good advice.
She gave me some pieces of advice.
pieces of pizza, cake, pie

Advice Columnist - a writer for a newspaper who gives advice to readers

Groups of two or three.
Read the scenario.
Come up with some good advice for the writer.