Wednesday, 13 November 2019

11:00 Criteria for a Good...

criteria - standard, rule, measurement, analyze, decide on something
criterion - singular

plural 'a' 's'
cat cats
key keys
criteria criterion
data datum
phenomena phenomenon

meet certain criteria - level, standard,

waking up our vocabulary -

words that have the same meaning - synonyms

thesaurus - very valuable tool for writers
thesaurus.com - building your vocabulary

dictionary - definition

ambiguity (n) - ambiguous (a) - not clear, not certain, not black and white, doubt

tolerate (v) - tolerance (n) - accept, stand, you may not like it, but you put up with it, negotiate?

He can tolerate ambiguity. He doesn't need a black and white answer to everything.

recursive (a)

assimilate (v) - similar, become the same

synthesize - take two things and make something new out of it, create

infer (v) - to make a good guess based on limited information

convey (v) - carry information, tell
She conveyed the story to her husband.

adhere - sticks, sticks to the rules
adhesive 
We must adhere to the rules of the road when we are driving.

speculate (v)- guess, make a good guess

"I think John must have had car trouble. That's why he is late" she speculated.

To remember a new word, you must use it within 72 hours. 

ambiguous (a) ambiguity (n)



Paragraph - collection of sentences on one topic
5-7 sentences, not a rule
not a whole page

Write two paragraphs. Write one on a criteria that you good at already. Write the second paragraph about a criteria that you want to get better at.




8:30 7/10 Criteria and paragraph

criteria - something to choose, determine what you want, near to your idea, basis, things that you need, level of quality, steps to follow, necessities for achievement, qualities that you need, characteristics

generate good useful vocabulary - build more vocab
effort - stick to it - brainstorming

thesaurus - best tools 
like a dictionary - a dictionary gives definitions
a standard of judgment or criticism; a rule or principle for evaluating or testing something.

thesaurus.com - wonderful tool for writers, wide selection of synonyms




ambiquity - not black or white, grey
not clear, tension, 
tolerate (v)- tolerance (n) - accept something but not being really comfortable, being patient, endure

infer- to make a good guess based on limited information

meander (v) - walk around aimlessly, with no direction, wandering
talking without purpose or sense

academic writing - no topic sentence. no organization

recursiveness (n) recursive (a)

Use this word in a conversation within 72 hours or it will be gone.

adheres (v) sticks to
adhesive - glue

satisfaction (n) satisfied (a)- feel good, happy, content, confident

I was not satisfied with her answer.
Sarah was not satisfied with her math results.
The ice cream was really satisfying.



Paragraph - collection of sentences on one topic
5-7 sentences, not a rule
not a whole page

Write two paragraphs. Write one on a criteria that you good at already. Write the second one about a criteria that you want to get better at.








Tuesday, 12 November 2019

8:30 7/10 Homework


Read the criteria.
Consider (think about, no need to write anything):
Which one(s) do you feel you already do well?
Which one(s) do you feel you have to improve upon?


7/10 Chatting and writing


·      Ice-breaker - social situation


Small group talk and pass-in paragraph (not for 
marks)
Students in groups of two (or three)
A) Interview your partner.
1) Home
2) Family
3) Occupation
4) Hobbies
5) Travel
6) Future plans

B) Make notes.
C) Write sentences about one of your partners.  Pass-in to me.
                        NOT FOR MARKS!




10/7 First day notes

Composition 10
Literary Studies 10
English Foundations 7
8:30-10:45
11:00-1:15

Allan Haley ahaley@vsb.bc.ca
first initial + last name

November 12, 2019- January 24, 2020
HOLIDAYS
Remembrance Day Nov 11
Winter Break (Xmas) December 20, 2019(last day) - January 5, 2020

Total 44 classes - should be

44 X 2.25 = 99 hrs
about the same as a regular high school


English 10 - broken up into pieces
Composition 10 - writing
to compose (v)
- sentences, being able to write a good sentence
start with simple, compound, complex
- you'll find your level
- verbs, verb forms, verb tenses
- punctuation , comma    ; semicolon
- practice, practice, practice - grammar exercises, sentence combining exercises!!

Modes of writing - different purposes for writing
- narrative - personal story
- descriptive writing - describe, descriptive language, adjective - 
five senses - touch, sight, hearing, smell, taste
sixth sense - ESP, extra-sensory perception, weird feeling
- process writing , teach someone how to do something, explain how something works
- persuasive writing, convince someone to agree with you, explain why your opinion is a valid opinion
- compare and contrast - similarities and differences
- definition writing - present something in writing, explain what it is

- paragraphs - process, step by step to build a paragraph
- essays - multi-paragraph writing (4-7 paragraphs)

- business letters
- complaint letters



Literary Studies 10
- literature - short stories, poetry, novel?
- literary terms, poetry terms
Read a story. Discuss it in small groups and with the class. Write about it.


English Foundations 7 
- same as Composition 10 and Literary Studies 10
English Foundations - people who have graduated high school previously in any country
- government regulation - WHY?

Foundations levels 1-6 beginning levels
Credit course 10, 11, 12
EF7 - transition course

English 11&12 - everyone is together


MARKS
Quizzes (6-8 quizzes) - short, 15m, grammar, sentence writing , specific skills - 3pts each
Tests (5-7 tests) - longer pieces, usually a paragraph about a story, non-fiction reading- 7pts each
Essays (usually 2 essays) - at the end of the course- 10pts each
Presentation (individual or group) 10pts
Rewrite of all quizzes, tests, essays 1pt each
Spoken in-class 20pts

Average of all the marks - percentage %
50% pass mark

*I will adjust the assignments and marks according to the class.

Books: 
short story book Impact
paragraph writing book Writing to Communicate
novel? Animal Farm

Do I have enough? I will figure that out in the next day or so.

How can we divide Composition 10 and Literary Studies 10?

Mon&Tues - Composition
W - transition day, flex day
Thurs&Fri -Literary Studies


Expectations and Classroom Policies:
Write all tests, homework and assignments in 

black or blue pen, double-spaced on lined 

paper.  You may not use dictionaries during 

work for marks.
Using languages other than English will interfere with your learning experience and may lower your marks.

Attendance and Participation:
Consistent attendance and positive participation in class are important factors in student success.  At South Hill Education Centre, we require that all students demonstrate their commitment to their studies by attending regularly and by participating in class activities.

Missed Work:
You can arrange with me to make up the occasional missed test or quiz within a few days.

Academic Honesty:
Academic honesty is expected of all students. Cheating (including plagiarism) is a serious offence with immediate consequences. For more information, please refer to the “Academic Honesty Policy” posted in each classroom or ask for a copy in the office.

Most Important:

Have fun and good luck!

Class blog- online public space for writing
BLOG URL

haleyshec.blogspot.com

My blog is open to you. It is public and has no password or login. Feel free to use it as much as you like forever.






Friday, 1 November 2019

Writing567 Review of course

supplemental course - writing support

Sentences 
*simple

*compound
, SOBA
; TRANS,

*complex
adverb clauses
noun clauses
adjective clauses


sentence combining exercises !!

verb tenses

phrasal verbs - very important!! verb+prep

idioms -

MODES OF WRITING
definition writing
process writing
descriptive writing
narrative writing

Paragraph structure

Writing process- Prewriting, and then Writing

Essays - multi-paragraph writing
Persuasive essay
Compare or Contrast essay

All of this is on blog, and it will stay on the blog forever.  Feel free to check it out any time you like.

Hopefully the class was useful and worthwhile.
I enjoyed it.


eternal, forever, for good

EF56 Review of course

Sentences -
simple
sv ssv svv

compound
sv, and sv
sv, but sv
SOBA, FANBOYS
sv ; sv
sv ; however therefore moreover then next, sv

complex
adverb cl
because if when since after before even though as
as if until

noun clauses
feel that
think that
say that
know how
believe that 
understand how/that

adjective clauses
who that which
who - people
that - things and people(distant, not personal)
which - things, special things, unique things


verb forms 
phrasal verbs!!! super important- verb + preposition
talk to
talk about
talk over

verbs with gerunds and infinitives
like skiing, like to ski
hate driving, hate to drive
love
prefer
start
continue

, ing style
She is on sitting on the beach, watching the waves roll in.

All on the blog.

Paragraphs
TS
-points
CS

Essays- five-paragraph essays



Short stories -
literary terms

One poem

First Nations


Letter-writing
business style

Human rights - Amnesty

Civil Rights - Rosa, Viola, Little Rock Nine

group chatting - chewing the fat


Busy? Fun? Worthwhile?

I had a good time. 
Thank you very very much for being a good class.