2. He had been collecting rocks for three years, but he had been interested for longer, ever since his family visited Uncle Cliff.
He had been collecting rocks for three years, but he had been interested for longer, ever since his family visited his Uncle Cliff.
Even though he had been collecting rocks for three years, he had been interested for longer, ever since his family visited his Uncle Cliff.
He had been collecting rocks for three years but interested for longer. parallel
collecting (verb)
interested (adj)
3. His mind wandered, and then he remembered.
His mind wandered as he remembered.
4. They had all walked down narrow stairs to the basement to see the latest additions to the collection.
They had all walked down narrow stairs to the basement, but Jeremy stayed to see the latest additions to the collection.
5, They were rocks everywhere: on the floor, under the benches, and on the tables.
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She has three kids: two boys and a girl.
He is taking two classes: Chem 12 and Physics 11.
6. Some were being cut, and some were ready for the tumbler; still others were lying on a table ready to be made into jewelry.
7. Jeremy's uncle answered all Jeremy's questions and explained all the processes as/while they worked side by side in the cluttered basement.
Jeremy's uncle answered and explained all Jeremy's questions about the processes.
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