Eng10/ EF7 Sentence combining Sheet #3

4. That may be true; however, I have often wondered why it has to be that way. COMPOUND
That may be true; however, I have often wondered why it has to be that way. 
That may be true, but I have often wondered why it has to be that way. COMPOUND

Stubborn- 

5. Why is it impossible to have everything and to be completely satisfied? SIMPLE
Why is it impossible to have everything and be completely satisfied? SIMPLE

6. illustration = example

If you think about the illustration of the cake, it does not make sense. COMPLEX
When you think about the illustration of the cake, it does not make sense.
The illustration of the cake does not make sense when you think about it. FANCIER COMPLEX

7. Who would make a cake and not enjoy eating it afterward? SIMPLE
Who would make a cake but not enjoy eating it afterward?

8. If you consider it carefully, there is definitely something wrong with the logic of the illustration. COMPLEX
There is definitely something wrong with the logic of the illustration when you consider it carefully.

"You cannot have your cake and eat it, too." EXPRESSION, ADAGE, SAYING

dollar = buck SLANG $

loonie $1 coin "loon" bird
1987- stupid idea "loony" SLANG crazy


Proofreading

1. a very important
2. try
3. make
4. one of the guidelines
5.
6. him
7. Instead,
8. the animal, attacks
9. 
10. is a good experience
11. This example shows
12.
13.

Editing business- 


He made the dream end.
CAUSATIVE VERB
help make ask invite

He helped her move. to move
He asked her to move. to move

ask "I ask a question."
 "She asked her sister to wash the dishes."