paragraphs
STRUCTURE / FORM / INTENT
What is a paragraph?
- collection of sentences- SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
BIG MESS
- disorganized, too long
6-7 sentences
retold the story, PLOT PLOT PLOT
EXAMPLE
Why did the mother yell at her daughter?
1 What does the teacher want me to do?
2. Generate ideas
1- mother was upset that the daughter quit chess
2-mother was trying to teach the daughter a life lesson
3- telling the daughter that she can’t quit and go back easily
- daughter’s attitude upset her mother
- mother was embarrassed because daughter yelled at her on the street
3. Organize- IMPORTANCE, TIME, SPACE
IMPORTANCE
4.Rough copy
Why did the mother yell at her daughter?
first sentence should focus on the question
copy some of the vocab of the question, use synonyms
Why did the mother yell at her daughter?
The mother yelled at the daughter for three reasons.
The mother yelled at the daughter because she upset at her.
IMPORTANCE- best point last
3- telling the daughter that she can’t quit and go back easily
2-mother was trying to teach the daughter a life lesson
1- mother was upset that the daughter quit chess
The first reason is the mother wanted the daughter to understand that she couldn’t quit things and start them easily in life.
Secondly, the mother was trying to teach the daughter a life lesson about how to be responsible.
Most importantly, the mother was quite upset that the daughter quit chess because the daughter lost her ability to play at a high level.
5. Edit
Why did the mother yell at her daughter?
The mother yelled at the daughter for three reasons.
The first reason is the mother wanted the daughter to understand that she couldn’t quit things and start them easily in life.
Secondly, the mother was trying to teach the daughter a life lesson about how not to be immature.
Most importantly, the mother was quite upset that the daughter quit chess because the daughter lost her ability to play at a high level.
In conclusion, the mother yelled at the daughter for the reasons stated above.
In brief, the mother yelling at the daughter represented a big change in their relationship.
Why did the mother yell at her daughter?
The mother yelled at the daughter for three reasons. The first reason is the mother wanted the daughter to understand that she couldn’t quit things and start them easily in life. Secondly, the mother was trying to teach the daughter a life lesson about how not to be immature. Most importantly, the mother was quite upset that the daughter quit chess because the daughter lost her ability to play at a high level. In conclusion, the mother yelled at the daughter for the reasons stated above.
WHEN MARKING
1. Format
2. TOPIC SENTENCE!!!!!
3. Examples
4. Quality of sentences- SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX
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