My Beautiful Grandmother
SPECIFIC TOPIC
beautiful- looks, face, old
hair- short, curly, dyed- blue rinse, well kept, brushed, permed
eyes- sky blue, bright, twinking, laughing, laugh lines, crow's feet
nose- tall nose, pointed nose, button nose
cheeks- pale, wrinkled, too much rouge, dimples
mouth- false teeth- dentured, smiling
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TOPIC SENTENCE- topic, controlling idea
My grandmother had a very beautiful face even when she was very old. First of all, she had very nice short curly permed hair that she always kept neatly brushed. Interestingly, she dyed her hair blue which was the style in the late 70s. Also, she had bright sky-blue eyes which were always twinkling becuase she liked to laugh and tell jokes. She had laugh lines around her eyes.
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You can see that she was very charming looking in her later years.
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