1. The girl won the race who is happy. NO GOOD
The girl who is happy won the race . GOOD
The girl who won the race is happy. GOOD
A BIT DIFFERENT IN FOCUS
The girl who is happy won the race .
The girl who won the race is happy.
My sister who just had a baby is 27. MAIN CLAUSE IS IMPORTANT
My sister who is 27 just had a baby. BETTER FOCUS
WRITING STYLE
2. The student who sits next to me is from China.
She is happy because it is a nice day.
It is a nice day, so she is happy.
STYLE- HIGH LEVEL
3. The taxi driver took me to the airport because he was friendly. NOT TRUE
The taxi driver who was friendly took me to the airport.
The taxi driver who took me to the airport was friendly.
STYLE- EMPHASIS, WHAT'S MOST IMPORTANT
4. I am running late, so I have to skip breakfast.
I have to skip breakfast because I am running late.
5. The dog is cute. The dog is wagging his tail.
The dog that is wagging his tail is cute.
The cute dog is wagging his tail.
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