EF234 sent comb

1. Linda made a great dish that was spicy and had seafood in it. LONG, NOT BEAUTIFUL
Linda made a great seafood dish that was spicy.
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Linda made a great spicy seafood dish. GOOD
Linda made a spicy seafood dish that was great.
The spicy seafood dish that Linda made was great.
2. I have to do the laundry, make the beds, and clean the living room, too.
3. Bob received a letter from his parents in Miami.
4. We are going to the station to meet my brother at nine o'clock.
At nine o'clock, we are going to the station to meet my brother.
We are going to meet my brother in the station at nine o'clock.
5. Ken, Laura and Ed are good typists.
6. I'm sending a package of books and magazines to my sister who lives in Columbia.
I'm sending a package that are has some books and magazines to my sister who lives in Columbia.

There are some books and magazines in the package (that OMIT I'm sending to my sister) (who lives in Columbia).

She bought a new car (that has a stereo) (that gets satellite radio).

The package has books and magazines in it.

to be/ to have

7. When the weather clears, let's take the train and go to the beach.
When the weather clears, let's take the train to the beach.
Let's go to the beach by train when the weather clears.
Let's take the train to the beach when the weather clears.

8. Jeff is a hard worker; in fact, he works in the sales department ten hours a day.
Jeff, who works ten hours a day in the sales department, is a hard worker.
Jeff, who works in the sales department, is a hard worker; in fact, he works ten hours a day.
Jeff, who works in the sales department, is a hard worker; in fact, he works ten hours a day.
9. Since the weather was terrible, we didn't have a picnic and or play ball either.

We played ball and had a picnic.
We didn't play ball or have a picnic.

You can have a sandwich and soup. 2 things
You can have a sandwich or soup. 1 thing
You can't have a sandwich or soup. 0 things

10. I'm going to wear the warm red sweater that my sister made for me.
I'm going to wear the warm red sweater which my sister made it for me.
The car (that I bought it) is old.


I'm going to wear the warm red sweater; my sister made it for me.

My sister made a red sweater for me; it is warm, so I'm going to wear it.


VARIETY OF STYLES- DIFFERENT TYPES OF SENTENCES

There are different types/styles/varieties of apples.