TOPIC SENTENCE- topic, controlling idea
SPECIFIC, CLEAR
Vancouver is a great place to be in the summer.
SUPPORTING IDEAS
- weather, sunny, warm, not too hot, less rain
- scenery, Northshore mountains, ex. the Lions,
- activities, hiking- Gross Mountain, Dog Mountain, Cypress Mountain, biking-Seawall, Stanley Park, English Bay beach
PLAN
ROUGH COPY
Vancouver is a great place to be in the summer.
First of all, the weather in summer in Vancouver
is usually excellent. It is often sunny and warm
with little rain. Secondly, there is lots of scenery
to enjoy. For example, you can look at the
Northshore mountains such as the Lions and
Mount Seymour; also, there are lots of wildlife
that you can see under the clear blue skies.
Finally, you can be active in the city. You can bike
around Stanley Park, or go swimming at English
Bay or Kitsilano Beach. Also, you can go for a
leisurely walk in any of the hundreds of parks in
the city. Vancouver is definitely the place to be in
the summer, and thousands of tourists would
agree.
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