1. David and Peter went (to the White
Mountains) (in June) (on a camping trip) (in New Hampshire).
(In June), David and Peter went (to the White Mountains) (on a camping trip)
(in New Hampshire).
2. After they checked all their
equipment, they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains.
They checked all their equipment before they got into the car for the
long ride to the mountains.
They checked all their equipment before getting into the car for the long
ride to the mountains.
After checking all their equipment, they got into the car for the long
ride to the mountains.
3. As soon as they arrived at the campground,
they set up camp near a small stream.
4. David put up the tent while Peter cooked
supper over the fire.
5. After they crawled into their
sleeping bags, they became nervous when they began to hear animal noises.
7. They got up a sunrise before the other
campers and made a hearty breakfast.
8. David and Peter prepared for their
first long hike; they decided to go to the top of Mount Madison.
David and Peter prepared for their first long hike
which they decided would be to the top of Mount Madison.
David and Peter prepared for their first long hike and decided to go to
the top of Mount Madison. SIMPLE
It started to rain when they began to climb, so they decided to go home.
They started to climb but decided to go home after it started to rain.
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