Sentence Combining Sheet #1
1. The object looks long and thin and measures about eight inches in length.
The object looks long and thin, and it measures about eight inches in length.
The object looks long, thin and measures about eight inches in length. parallelism No good
The object looks long and thin and measures about eight inches in length.
The object which looks long and thin measures about eight inches in length.
The object which measures about eight inches in length looks long and thin.
I think that the object which looks long and thin measures about eight inches in length.
2. The object has many flat sides but appears rounded with a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch.
The object that has a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch has many flat sides but appears rounded.
The object has many flat sides, but it appears rounded with a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch.
The object has many flat sides but appears rounded, and it has a diameter that measures about 1/8 inch.
DENSE
The object has many flat sides. It appears rounded. It has a diameter of 1/8 inch.
VARIETY IS THE KEY
3. It comes in many colours outside and inside; however, usually the outside is yellow and the inside is greyish black.
Although it comes in many colours outside and inside, usually the outside is yellow, and the inside is greyish black.
It comes in many colours outside and inside although usually the outside is yellow, and the inside is greyish black.
It comes in many colours outside and inside although usually the outside is yellow while the inside is greyish black.
I like cats, but she likes dogs.
I like cats while she likes dogs.
COMMAS ARE VERY PERSONAL, PERSONAL PREFERENCE
STYLE
4. Along the outside of the object, there is often writing and a number which is often a 2 or a 3.
There is commonly/ frequently/ usually writing and a number which is often a 2 or a 3 along the outside of the object.
5. The top of the object is made of rubber that has an aluminum band around it, and the bottom comes to a sharp point.
The top of the object is made of rubber with an aluminum band around it, and the bottom comes to a sharp point.
7. The longer you use the object, the shorter and duller it gets.
The longer I sleep, the more tired I feel.
The more I eat, the hungrier I get.
The more places you go, the more things you know.
The more I read, the smarter I get/ become.
8. The object is often used by students, artists, and office workers.
The object is often used by students, artists and office workers.
The object is often used by students, artists, and also office workers.
The object is often used by students and artists; also, it is used by office workers. OVERWRITTEN
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