EF2/3 sentence combining "Dad at Home"

Dad at Home

1.     Jackie’s dad is a truck driver who has driven for twenty years, but he is taking a year off to be with Jackie.

Jackie dad, who has been driving trucks for twenty years, is going to take a year off to be with Jackie.

Jackie’s dad is a truck driver who has been driving for twenty years; he is taking a year off to be with Jackie.

2.     He now works at home with Jackie as a full-time parent.

Now his full-time job is parenting Jackie at home.

Now his full-time job is at home parenting Jackie.

3.     They clean and repair the house, cook the meals, shop, and have fun.

They have fun cleaning and repairing the house, cooking the meals and shopping.

4.     They play in the afternoon; they paint, picnic, go to movies or cycle.

In the afternoons, they paint, picnic, go to movies, and cycle.

5.     Jackie, who is four, enjoys each day that she spends with her dad.

Four-year-old Jackie enjoys spending each day with her dad.