Friday, 23 June 2023

EF 7 11 Class 41 Essay, pres, vt

 

Good morning, everyone.

 

Today’s agenda:

·      Continue essay work

“Good Advice about Planning an Essay”

“Brainstorming Techniques”

“Essay Plan”

·      Finish presentation work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 9

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

 

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

·      Vocab exercise

 

 

Monday

·      Presentation day

I will gather the scripts first thing, at the beginning of class. Make sure you have one printed for me.

6 groups to do their thing.

 

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

·      Vocab exercise

 

 

Tuesday

·      MOSTLY THE FULL CLASS

Final test AF Ch 7-10 – essay

I will not have much time to mark the essay in detail- grammar

I’ll read it and give a mark.

 

Wednesday

·      Marks Day

·      Final class

·      Not an instructional day

We can meet one-on-one to discuss your final result.

 

 

 

“Good Advice about Planning an Essay” – Eng 11 and 12

‘the writing prompt’- question, topic that the teacher is giving you to write about

e.g.    Discuss Old Major’s vision for the animals’ future.”

          Are the animals following Old Major’s vision?”

ADVICE TO Eng 12- Read the writing prompt five times. Read every word. What is the teacher asking me to write about?

 

“Brainstorming Techniques”

 

“Essay Plan”

An outline to help you/us stay organized.

 

 

 

 

 

“Advanced-Level Verb Tense Exercises”

11. past tense – CHOICE       simple past ‘watched’

                                                   past progressive   ‘was watching’

past progressive – often used when there is another action, interrupts the first action

 

12. have been – present perfect- from the past until now

13. didn’t come   did not come, could not come   couldn’t come

14. had studied- past perfect, studied- simple past   could study

15. had read-past perfect, read- simple past

Past perfect is rarely used by native English speakers. We usually subsitute simple past.

16. future tenses- will run, is going to run, will be running

present progressive can suggest future- is running

He is going to Seattle this weekend.

17. met

18. was

19. has not seen  - preset perfect

20. walk – simple present

I like to walk to ...

I like walking to ...

 

like + gerund

like + infinitive

hate

love

prefer

begin

start

continue

She will continue to study math. She will continue studying dance.

 

 

can’t stand- really don’t like   I can’t stand listening to people complain.

 

21. He just finished his degree.  He has just finished his degree.

22. taught   was teaching   had taught

23. have been reading   was reading-casual

24. have travelled – present perfect

 

 

 

 

Thursday, 22 June 2023

EF 1 2 Class 40 "Questions"

 

English Foundations 1&2

Speaking and Listening 1/2

 

 

Today’s class plan:

·      “Questions”

 

IF TIME

·      Continue Listening work Word List 1.6

·      Vocab exercises Exercise 23

·      Review sentence types

·      Review verb tenses

 

·      Test#8- descriptive paragraph (final 45m)

 

Friday

·      Adverbs

·      Review sentence types

·      Review verb tenses

 

Next week

·      Test verb tenses

 

Our final day is Wednesday, June 28th.

 

 

 

“Wh- Questions”

 

Do you have any ideas?

Do you have any ABC?

supermarket- Do you have any white brown black / purple rice?

Do you have any paprika?

Do you have any saffron?

Do you have any English courses in August?

 

Where do you want to go?

Where do you want to VERB?

Where do you want to eat?

Where do you want to walk?

Where do you want to bike?

Where do you want to study?

Where do you want to live?

Where What do you want to do?

Where do you want to sit?

Where do you want to country? country(noun)

Where do you want to travel?

Where do you want to visit?

Where do you want to swim?

Where do you want to spend your time?

Where do you want to work?

Where do you want to gym exercise/work out?

 

What do you recommend?

What do you VERB?

What do you suggest?

What do you advise?

What do you do? What is your job?

 

Different meaning

What are you doing? -right now-

 

Which is better for you? Which would be better for you? Which one do you like prefer?

 

rather – prefer

I would rather go to school than go to work.

 

Do you know a good place?

Do you know a good class?

Do you know a good NOUN?

Do you know a good restaurant?

Do you know a good doctor?

Do you know a good vet?

Do you know a good place to VERB?

Do you know a good place to walk?

Do you know a good place to swimming swim?

Do you know a good place to eat

Do you know a good place to park? – park your car-

Do you know a good place to exercise late at night?

Do you know a good place to go dancing?

Do you know a good place to see the sunset?

Do you know a good place to study Farsi?

Do you know a good place to buy a bottle of wine?

Do you know a good place to get a phone fixed?

Do you know a good place to meet people?

 

When do you want to go?

When do you want to VERB?

When do you want to buy a computer?

When do you want to eat?

When do you want to change the oil in your car?

When do you want to join/have the meeting?

When do you want to go to bed?

When do you want to add paprika to the food?

When do you want to get a job?

When do you want to leave?

 

When do you want to start your new job?

When do you want to start?

When do you want to fix your house furnace/water heater?

When do you want to clean your bathroom?

When do you want to get dressed?

When do you want to go out?

When do you want to go shopping?

When do you want to cook dinner?

When do you want to get married?

When do you want to watch a/the movie?

When do you want to see me again?

When do you want to come back?

When do you want to take a vacation?

 

How much does a cruise cost?

How much does a NOUN cost?

How much does a sandwich cost?

How much does a house cost in Vancouver?

How much does a used/new car cost?

How much does a wedding/evening/summer dress cost?

How much does a bike cost?

How much does an Uber cost?

 

Taking the bus is cheaper / less expensive  less than taking an Uber.

 

She bought an economical car.  – not cheap, not expensive

She bought a mid-priced car.

 

Who should I ask for?

Who should I VERB?

Who should I call?

Who should I talk to?

Who should I email?

Question Words

What

When

Where

Why

Who

Which

How many

How much

How long

What time

How old

 

OTHERS

How far

 

 

 

Test #8

Write a paragraph that describes the picture.

 

 

 

 

 

EF 7 11 Class 40 Presentation

 

Good morning, everyone.

 

Lunar calendar- May 5

Dragon Boat Festival

 

Today’s agenda:

·      Continue essay work

“The Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay”

“The Benefits of Cycling”

·      Presentation work – Continue to work on our presentations.

Give me the printed script on Monday, not tomorrow. Monday is the day.

 

·      Animal Farm Chapter 9

·      Continue First Nations lecture

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

Friday

·      Continue essay work

“Good Advice about Planning an Essay”

“Brainstroming Techniques”

“Essay Plan”

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

·      Finish presentation work

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

 

Monday

·      Presentation day

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

 

Tuesday

·      Final test AF Ch 7-10 – essay

I will not have much time to mark the essay in detail- grammar

I’ll read it and give a mark.

 

Wednesday

·      Marks Day

·      Final class

·      Not an instructional day

We can meet one-on-one to discuss your final result.

 

 

 

“The Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay”

A Introductory paragraph

                    -Grabber

-Thesis statement – same as a Topic Sentence for a

paragraph

                     -Preview of your points (2,3,4)

 

 

B Body paragraphs

 

          1.Topic sentence

                     SS

                     CS?

          2. TS

               SS

3. TS

               SS

 

C Concluding paragraph - restatement

 

 

From ChatGBT:

The Benefits of Bicycles

 

Bicycles have been around for centuries, and they continue to be one of the most efficient and versatile forms of transportation. Whether for commuting, exercise, or leisure, bicycles offer a wide range of benefits that contribute to personal health, environmental sustainability, and community well-being.

First and foremost, cycling is an excellent form of exercise. Riding a bicycle provides a low-impact cardiovascular workout that strengthens muscles, improves joint flexibility, and enhances overall fitness. Regular cycling can help reduce the risk of heart disease, obesity, and other lifestyle-related illnesses. It also boosts mental well-being by reducing stress and improving mood.

Bicycles are an eco-friendly mode of transportation. Unlike cars, they produce zero emissions and do not contribute to air or noise pollution. By choosing bicycles over motor vehicles for short-distance trips, individuals can actively reduce their carbon footprint and contribute to mitigating climate change. Additionally, cycling promotes sustainable urban planning by reducing traffic congestion and the need for large parking spaces.

Moreover, bicycles offer economic advantages. They are relatively affordable compared to cars and motorcycles, making them accessible to a wide range of individuals. The maintenance costs of bicycles are also significantly lower than those of motorized vehicles. By opting for bicycles, individuals can save money on fuel, parking fees, and public transportation expenses.

Furthermore, cycling promotes community engagement and social interaction. Bicycles allow people to explore their neighborhoods, discover new routes, and connect with others who share similar interests. Cycling events and group rides foster a sense of camaraderie and create opportunities for building friendships and community bonds.

In conclusion, bicycles offer numerous benefits for individuals and society as a whole. From promoting personal health and well-being to reducing environmental impact and fostering community engagement, bicycles play a crucial role in creating a sustainable and vibrant future. Encouraging cycling infrastructure and promoting cycling as a preferred mode of transportation can lead to healthier individuals, cleaner environments, and stronger communities.

 

MY SIMPLIFIED VERSION

Getting more people out on bikes can make us all healthier, the world cleaner, and our communities closer.

 

 

The Benefits of Cycling

 

         Once you have learned it, you will never forget how.  Cycling is an excellent alternate means of transportation for several reasons.  Cycling is much more inexpensive than driving a car.  Cycling provides an excellent opportunity to get in top physical shape.  Also, cycling is easier on the environment than driving your car.

         Riding your bicycle will help you save on the expenses cost of owning a car.  As car insurance costs rise, everyone is looking for a way to cut down on transportation expenses.  One alternative is to park your car and ride your bicycle.  The money you save on gasoline and insurance will pay for an excellent bicycle which will last for years with little extra repair costs.  Whereas a trip to the garage for your car usually costs $500 or $600, a trip to the bicycle repair shop often costs only $50 or $60.

         You can ride your bicycle to improve your health.  Cycling to work three times a week will strengthen your heart and lungs.  Also, you may find your waistline shrinking as you burn off that excess fat.  Being in good physical shape helps you feel energetic and helps you to think clearly.  Finally, a bit of exercise first thing in the morning puts you in a positive frame of mind for the entire day.

         Ride your bicycle to save the environment Mother Nature. Everybody these days is worried about pollution.  Nobody likes to see dirty grey skies and to breathe dirty air.  Leaving your car parked a few times each week will reduce the emissions from your car engine.  Over time, less used oil will be released into the environment, and the mountains of rusting cars and worn out tires will shrink.

         In conclusion, cycling is a great alternative option to driving your car.  Riding is a lot cheaper than driving.  You will get healthier and stronger.  You will also be doing your part to save the environment the Earth.  Plus, it is a fun way to see the city and meet new people.  So get out and ride your bicycle.

 

 

 

Wednesday, 21 June 2023

EF 1 2 Class 39 Describing beautiful places

 

English Foundations 1&2

Speaking and Listening 1/2

 

Registration for September courses started today. You will have to see an advisor first before you can register for September.

 

Today’s class plan:

·      “The Provincial Proficiency Scale”

·      Check descriptive paragraphs from homework

·      Read descriptive writing aloud

·      Begin adverbs

IF TIME

·      Continue Listening work Word List 1.6

·      Vocab exercises Exercise 23

·      Review sentence types

·      Review verb tenses

 

Thursday

·      Adverbs

·      Review sentence types

·      Review verb tenses

·      Test#8- descriptive paragraph

 

Friday

·       

·       

 

Next week

·      Test verb tenses

 

Our final day is Wednesday, June 28th.

 

“The Provincial Proficiency Scale”

New marking strucuture- starting in September in Adult Education

-already used in schools is BC – K-9

 

formative feedback- building skills- writing, speaking, listening, reading 

 

marks are expressed a %  50% 75%

new vocabulary to give feedback that is not a percentage, not a %

 

Emerging- just beginning to show understanding

Developing- growing ability, initial understanding

Proficient- able to do the work at a good level

Extending- beyond the level of the class

 

 

Teacher doing midterm reports will be using this vocabulary to give feedback. Teachers will also be using this vocabulary throughout the term.

 

I will start using this vocabulary starting now. All teachers will be using it in September.

 

 

IE – insufficient evidence- The student hasn’t done enough work for the teacher to know what their level is.

 

 

New vocabulary: IE   Emerging   Developing   Proficient   Extending

 

 

Check descriptive paragraphs from homework

Choose a nice place in your home country. Write a short paragraph descibing that place.

Read descriptive writing aloud.

 

 

*Chabahar, Beris Valley, Pink Lake, Merikhi Mountain, Iran

 

*Cenotes, Yucatan, Mexico

10,000 cenotes in the Yucatan

 

*Ba Na Hills, Viet Nam

Vietnam – Vietnamese (people) 100,000,000

 

*Cheng Du, China (Country of Heaven)

 

*Karachi, Pakistan

 

*The Persian Gulf, Iran

 

*Kabul, Afghanistan

Afghan Chopan Restaurant, Surrey

 

*Shanghai, China  24,000,000 population

 

 

**

Exercise 23 Vocabulary Practice

 

 

EF7 11 Class 39 National Indigenous Peoples' Day

 

Good morning, everyone.

 

Today’s agenda:

·      National Indigenous Peoples' Day

·      Presentation work

·      Optional Replacement test or quiz (last 55m of class)

 

 

Thursday

·      Continue essay work

“The Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay”

“The Benefits of Cycling”

·      Animal Farm Chapter 9

·      Presentation work

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

 

Friday

·      Continue essay work

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

·      Finish presentation work

 

IF TIME

·      Continue parallelism

·      Continue sentence combining

·      Remaining verb exercises – verb tenses, phrasal verbs

 

 

Monday

·      Presentation day

·      Animal Farm Chapter 10

 

Tuesday

·      Final test AF Ch 7-10 – essay

I will not have much time to mark the essay in detail- grammar

I’ll read it and give a mark.

 

Wednesday

·      Marks Day

·      Final class

·      Not an instructional day

We can meet one-on-one to discuss your final result.

 

 

 

First Nations

 

Lecture notes for First Nations

 

·      Starting in May, 2021

·      Unmarked graves of First Nations children have been found on the grounds of old Residential Schools, 315 kids? in Kamloops

·      more and more unmarked graves discovered across Canada

·      1700 graves found so far

ground-penetrating radar

·      probably hundreds and hundreds, thousands more across Canada

 

·      Residential Schools- over 4000 kids died, maybe 6000

 

·      Residential Schools all across Canada

https://www.thecanadianencyclopedia.ca/en/article/residential-schools-in-canada-interactive-map

·      Organized by the Canadian government, run by the churches, paid for by the federal government

·      about 150 000 First Nations kids were forcibly taken away from their families to Residential Schools from 1860s to 1990s.

 

Revelations- big ugly secrets-

·      Focus of BC new curriculum- First Nations

First Nations ways of knowing, culture, history in Canada

e.g. First Peoples English 12

Very interesting area of study – good choice - First Peoples 10, First Peoples English 11, and First Peoples 12

We offer these classes at South Hill – some students do both

 

·      My school experiences- none of the history, social studies, was about First Nations

The focus was history class was on Europeans, settlers, White men in Canada

male-centred, Euro-centred

 

·      lots of First Nations kids in my school, segregated,

seemed normal

 

·      racism towards First Nations people “Indians”

dismissive, belittling, negative stereotypes

 

** Maybe tell these stories

·      policy at my university – have to finish your degree in seven years

students/ professors –led initiative to change it to 10 yrs

 

·      racism against First Nations – BCTF AGM story

700 teachers

“equity-seeking groups” wanted representation

 

Overview - introduction

·      First Nations -Who they are?

·      Small groups

“What do you know about First Nations people in Canada?”

Generate ideas on LCD

 

Three groups of people constitute Indigenous Peoples in Canada, also called First Peoples. Also called Aboriginal.

old word, outdated vocab Indian

1. First Nations

2. Inuit

3. Métis

 

First Nations came into common usage in the 1980s to replace the term ‘Indians’ Native

 

·      Talk about origin of the word ‘Indian’ due to geographical misunderstanding, West Indies

 

·      First Nations- Indigenous people in the South (below Arctic Circle). Half of all First Nations bands are in Ontario and BC.

·      Inuit are the Indigenous people who live in the North. Used to be called ‘Eskimo’- disparaging term from French Esquimaux, from Montagnais ayas̆kimew ‘person who laces a snowshoe’. Montagnais, or Innu, are the Indigenous inhabitants of an area they refer to as Nitassinan, which comprises most of the northeastern portion of the present-day province of Quebec and some eastern portions of Labrador.

Discredited etymology ‘raw fish eater’

Website: https://www.itk.ca/about-canadian-inuit/#nunangat

Show map: “Inuit Map”

·      Metis - a person of mixed Indigenous and European ancestry

1600s and 1700s - Fur trading European men came to hunt animals, like beavers

Fr- do not pronounce the ‘s’   may-tee

 

In particular one of a group of such people who in the 19th century constituted the so-called Metis nation in the areas around the Red and Saskatchewan rivers. Metis comes from the French word ‘métis’, which means ‘mixed’.

 

·      First Nations/ Inuit/ Metis

·      Where did these people come from?

·      First Nations creation myths/ stories

myth – legend, fiction, story, explains real life

Greek Myth- e.g. Echo-magical creature- nymph, Narcissus- narcissist

 

Every group has a creation story/myth

Bible- Garden of Eden, Adam and Eve

 

Koran- Quran - simlar story

 

 

Different First Nations groups have different creation stories.

 

·      Read “The Beginning of the Haidi Gwaii World” on LCD

·      Talk about Raven

- prominent role in the mythologies of the Indigenous peoples of the Pacific Northwest Coast, including the Tsimishians, Haidas, Heiltsuks, Tlingits, Kwakwaka'wakw, Coast Salish, Koyukons, and Inuit. The raven in these indigenous peoples' mythology is the Creator of the world, but it is also considered a trickster god.

-two different raven characters:

-the creator raven, responsible for bringing the world into being and who is sometimes considered to be the individual who brought light to the darkness

-the childish raven, always selfish, sly, conniving, and hungry

 

The Beginning of the Haida Gwaii World

 

In the beginning, before the creation of the world, the earth was completely covered by a vast ocean and the sky was all grey clouds. The cloud kingdom was ruled by the great Sha-lana. Sha-lana's Chief servant was Raven.

One day Raven enraged his master and was cast out into the ocean world. He flew over the ocean for a long period of time until he became weary. Unable to find a place to rest, Raven became angry. He began to beat his wings upon the water until the water rose up and touched the clouds around him.

When the water receded back into the ocean there appeared rocks upon which Raven rested. These rocks grew and stretched across the ocean. The rocks turned into sand and after a short period of time trees began to grow on the sand. After many moons the sand had turned into beautiful islands, which we know today as the Haida Gwaii (Queen Charlotte Islands).

Raven enjoyed his kingdom, yet he became bored and lonely. He decided he needed someone to help him. So one day he gathered two large piles of clam shells upon the beach and transformed them into two human females. These two women complained saying that they should not have both been created as women. So to make them happy Raven threw limpet shells at one and turned her into a man, creating the Haida Gwaii people."

 

Clark, E., Indian Legends of Canada, McClelland and Stewart: Toronto, 1991.

https://royalbcmuseum.bc.ca/exhibits/bc-archives-time-machine/galler07/frames/oralhist.htm

 

 

·      Show pictures “Raven1” “Raven2” “Raven and the First Men”

“Spirit of Haida Gwaii”, other pictures jewelry

·      Different First nations have different stories-

e.g.Micmac, Mi'kmaq, Glooscap

 

about 630 different nations in Canada- all different stories

 

·      Scientists- science-

anthropologists -anthropology – study of ancient people

Museum of Anthropology- UBC – focus on First Nations

 

-archeology- study of ancient humans, ancient civilations

First Nations – oral tradition, all spoken, no writing system, all storytelling

-transmitting culture and survival skills- plants, herbs, hunting, fishing, travelling, seasons,