Today’s Agenda
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Attendance
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Presentations 3
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Essay work
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Animal Farm Chapter 9
Friday, April 10
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Presentations 4
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Animal Farm Chapter 10
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Quiz 3- sentence combining
Final week- essay, movie
Monday, April 13
Tuesday, April 14
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Essay
Wednesday, April 15
Thursday, April 16
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Optional replacement quiz and/or test
Friday, April 17- final day
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One-on-one meetings, final marks and comments
Quarter 4 begins on Thursday, April 23rd.
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“Bare Bones of the Five-Paragraph Essay”
-yesterday bicycle essay
Model- Five-paragraph essay
Five-para
**A teacher is looking for structure, a clear organization
of ideas.
If the writing seems unfocussed or not organized, the mark
will suffer.
**An essay has a lot of repetition. It’s a balance of
repetition and new information.
**WRITING PROCESS**
A. Prewriting-
planning
1. Read
the question. Read every word five times. Make sure you understand the
question.
2. Generate
ideas- brainstorm, mindmap, list- vocabulary bank, synonyms
3. Organize into three groups
*Write down the key words.
B. Writing-
4. Rough draft, first version
5. Proofread, edit
6.Pass it in.
TOPIC: Why did you move to Canada?
Start now, finish the essay some for HW.
I can look at it tomorrow if you want.
**
EXAMPLE
Quiz 3
Combine each into one sentence.
Six sentences in total.
1. They
were shopping for a gift.
The gift was for their mother.
France saw a display.
Monika saw a display.
The display was in the mall.
It was of furniture.
The furniture was antique.
France and Monika were in the mall shopping
in the mall for a gift for their mother in the mall, and they saw
a display of antique furniture in the mall.
**
Animal Farm
Chapter 9 Discussion Notes
Boxer hurt, keeps working, not show pain
Clover nurse, Benjamin worried
looking forward to his retirement- good pension plan
hard winter, rations reduced except for pigs and dogs (75)
Squealer spins “readjustment”, figures
to prove life better
“they had been slaves and now they were free” (75)
Napoleon sires many children- educated, play apart
other animals must stand aside for pigs
pigs wear green ribbons on Sundays
successful year, but rations reduced, pigs still fat, comfortable
barley reserved for pigs, beer ration
life has “greater dignity” (77) songs, speeches, processions
Spontaneous Demonstrations (77) appointed time, military-like
procession
fluttering flags, empty bellies
AnimalFarm-Republic with president
further propaganda against Snowball regarding Battle of Cowshed
(78), Napoleon wounded Snowball
Moses the raven returns (78), outwardly condemned but supported by
pigs
Boxer tiring, weakening, collapses
knacker van- Benjamin finally speaks up, too late
Squealer spins van/ death
pigs drunk on whiskey
Where did the money for the whiskey come from?
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