Wednesday, 9 January 2019

EF3/4 Paragraph planning

Topic sentence: I dread the coming of summer.

1. weather hot, uncomfortable
2. too many at the beach
3. too many barbecues
4. kids are out of school
5. mosquitoes are active

3-4 ideas is enough


TS: I'll never forget Andy's and Mae's wedding.
1. rain came down in buckets - the bride's hair and makeup was a mess
2. groom's brother lost the ring 
3. cake fell over, dog ate it
4. two mothers got drunk and got into a fight



TS: Children often create toys from common household objects.
1. coffee can, drum
2. sofa, trampoline
3. wall, painting, drawing
4. fort, blankets and chairs
5. cardboard box, house, fortress
6. kitchen utensils, 


TS: My grandmother is a beautiful woman.
1. brown eyes, twinkle
2. hair, long grey silver
3. smile, white teeth, warm
4. skin, soft, clear, wrinkles

TS: We need a traffic light on Jefferson Avenue very badly.
1. three accidents
2. dangerous intersection
3. kids crossing, elementary school
4. heavy traffic in the mornings and rush hour, kids are playing

Plan first. Get your ideas down. Then the sentence writing is easier.



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