Eng12 Essay rough work

Achieving Success is a Process

Intro

Hook/grabber

Thesis statement with predictor

When you want to achieve anything difficult in your life, you have to remember to follow the three golden rules: work hard, adapt be flexible/ make changes / readjust , and don't quit.

to remember the three golden words: diligence, adaptation, and perseverance.

Body 1

Topic sentence: In order to be successful, you have to work hard. Like in the story "Jonathan Livingston Seagull", Jonathan wanted to learn how to fly better than the other seagulls.

For example,

For instance,

To illustrate,

To demonstrate this point,

Body 2

Another rung on the ladder to success is your ability to adapt your approach when it isn't working.

courage, fortitude, perspicacity

Body 3

The most crucial factor in your process is to never give up.   

Conclusion

restate thesis, and points

clincher