EF2/3 Narrative paragraph

Topic sentence- gives the topic of the paragraph

What the best thing that you did on Spring Break?

topic sentence must refer to the question


        I like to go shopping XXX. I went shopping in Seattle.

        I like to go shopping, so the best thing that I did was going shopping on Spring Break.


TOPIC SENTENCE- necessary for academic writing (school)



What the best thing that you did on Spring Break?

       The best thing that I did on Spring Break was 

relaxing at home. I did a lot of cooking for my 

family. Also, I did some Spring cleaning. Then I 

worked in the garden. Finally, every night I 

watched a movie. My Spring Break was very nice 

even thoug it wasn't exciting.


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        The best thing that I did on Spring Break

was relaxing at home. I did a lot of cooking for

my family, and I taught my daughter how to make 

chili. Also, I did some Spring cleaning, especially 

the closets and the kitchen cupboards. Then I 

worked in the planter garden, and I planted some 

flowers and some herbs. Finally, every night 

I watched a movie with my family. My Spring 

Break was very nice even though it wasn't 

exciting.