Tuesday, 6 June 2017

English 11/12 Using quoted material

The girl gave up on her desire to be independent. “I didn’t protest even in my heart. Maybe it was true.” She accepted the role laid out for her by her family and society. XXX
INCORPORATE QUOTED MATERIAL INTO OUR OWN SENTENCES

“I didn’t protest even in my heart. Maybe it was true.”
“didn’t protest” IMPORTANT WORDS OR PHRASE

When the family dismissed the narrator, she accepted his approbation and “didn’t protest” any further. INCORPORATED
KEEP IT SHORT (2-4 words)

The father dismissed the narrator as being ”just a girl”, and this hurt her sense of self-worth.


“I thought it was just a girl.”
The father dismissed the narrator as being ”just a girl.”.

“their eyes burning, clear gold”
The narrator was unnerved by the foxes who stared at her, “their eyes burning, clear gold”. This shows that the foxes wanted to bite her which symbolizes the threat the girl was under from her family.

QUOTATIONS ARE LIKE SALT IN FOOD.

“I didn’t protest even in my heart.”

When the father dismissed the girl, she “didn’t protest even in [her] heart.”

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“[Trump] is a orange-haired barbarian, ‘a short-fingered vulgarian’ who is a menace to any woman within arms’ reach.”

THE TEACHER HAS TO LET YOU SEE THE TEXT IF THEY WANT YOU TO USE QUOTATION MARKS.

MAKE NOTES- CRITICAL TO ACADEMIC SUCCESS
YOU WON’T REMEMBER!! WRITE IT DOWN.

QUOTED MATERIAL IS ONE-USE.
“just a girl”

LIKE DENTAL FLOSS- ONE TIME ONLY






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