Avoid repetetition.
The boy kicked the door, the boy was angry, and the boy was small. LOW QUALITY
The boy kicked the door, the boy was angry, and the boy was small. BETTER
The small boy kicked the door and was angry.
The small angry boy kicked the door.
The small boy who was angry kicked the door.
The small boy kicked the door because he was angry.
The small boy was angry, so he kicked the door.
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