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The father, Musoni, was worried that his son, Nhamo, would come to harm when he left the farm to go to the city. “beasts would not leave an unprotected homeless boy alone.”(163) ADDED ON, GLUED ON, NO GOOD

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The father, Musoni, was worried that his son, Nhamo, would come to harm when he left the farm to go to the city. He knew that bad people might try to take advantage of his “unprotected homeless boy”(163) and hurt him or worse. PUT QUOTED MATERIAL INSIDE YOUR SENTENCE

The old man thought that his son would wind up a “homeless, nameless vagabond”(164) with no job or future.

He was worried the boy would have no means of supporting himself and would be “living on dust”(164) after he left.