“” quotation marks, citation, citing
evidence, proof- support your points
People in the town believe that the Wise Woman was “married
to the devil.”
People in the town believe that the Wise Woman and
the devil were a couple/ wife and husband. RESTATE TEXT- NO “”
The witch could grant any seemingly “impossible favour”
that a townperson might ask of her. GRAMMATICAL
The witch could help any townsperson “impossible favour”.
NOT GRAMMATICAL
When the witch was locked in the jail, she drew an “enormous
ship” on the wall.
QUOTE ONLY A FEW WORDS, 4-5 WORDS
INCORPORATE
The Wise Woman was well known. “very beautiful woman”
The Wise Woman was well known as a “very beautiful
woman”.
The Wise Woman, who was “very beautiful”, was well
known as a magic person.
The “Wise Woman” was “a very beautiful woman” who “helped
those in difficulty”. In fact, she “fulfilled
nonetheless their wishes”. Actually, she
“was clearly a witch.” NO GOOD
The Wise Woman was a “very beautiful woman”. People really liked this “very beautiful
woman.” The young men also liked her because
she was “a very beautiful woman.”
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