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What was Jonas' dream?

PROCESS

Ch5
"felt slightly embarrased"
tub, warm
bath
Fiona luaghing
Jonas "little angry at her" (35)
"take off her clothes" (36)
memoery was "murky and vague"
"feelings were clear" strong
NARRATIVE- TIME

ROUGH COPY           Jonas' dream was about Fiona.  He felt "slightly embarased" telling the dream to his family about how he dreamed anbout hving a bath with Fiona.  He told them how |he was a "little angry"that F|iona was laughin at him becuase he wanted to "take off her clothes".  As he told the sstory to his pparents and little sister, he remebered the emotions more than the "murky and vauge deatils".  In tte end. the sory showed his parents that he needed to sat taking the pill.

EDITED COPY      Jonas' dream was about Fiona.  He felt "slightly embarrassed" (36) telling his family about how he dreamed about having a bath with Fiona.  He told them how he was a "little angry" (35) that Fiona was laughing at him because he wanted to "take off her clothes" (36).  As he told the story to his parents and little sister, he remembered the emotions that he felt more than the "murky and vague details".  In the end. the story showed his parents that he needed to start taking the pill.