EF2/3 practice paragraph

ESL classes- narrative

What did you do on your Spring Break?

Topic sentence- topic “Spring Break”, busy

-         3 Cleaning up- yard

-         2 Meetings

-         1 Taking care of kids

FIRST DRAFT (rough copy)

My Spring Break was a very busy week.  Every day, I cleaned up a little bit around the yard to get ready for Spring.  For example, I cut the grass, planted flowers, and fixed the fence.  I was tired, but the yard looked good.  Also, I had to go to meetings.  For two days, I talked to my coworkers about the school.  The meetings were long but interesting.  Most busy of all was taking care of the kids.  They squabbled with each other every day all day long.  However, we got to spend time together.  As you can see, my holiday was enjoyable but hectic.

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