Title: My Beautiful
Grandmother
Topic
sentence:
4-5 Supporting
sentences
Concluding
sentence
My grandmother was a very beautiful
woman when she was old. First, she had
nice short silver hair that she kept brushed neatly. Sometimes, she got a perm and dyed it
blue. Second, her eyes were light brown
and very bright. Her eyes seemed to talk
when she looked at you. Third, her skin
was pale and soft with laugh lines all around.
She put on a lot of cream to keep looking young. Finally, her mouth was usually smiling with
dentures. She always wore lipstick. Clearly, my grandmother was a pretty senior,
and she was proud of that.
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