Combine each exercise is two different ways:
1.
The children stay for a week.
They stay at the camp.
They stay without their parents.
2.
They sleep in cabins.
The cabins are big.
The cabins are made of logs.
They sleep in cabins, and the cabins are big, and the cabins are made of logs. NOT GOOD STYLE
COMBINE THEM
They sleep in big cabins that are made of logs. DENSE
The cabins are big and made of logs, so they sleep in them. LOGIC?
The log cabins are big enough for all of the kids, so they sleep in them. CLEARER
The cabins are made of logs and big where they sleep in them. XXX
made of logs and big parallel
The big cabins where they sleep are made of logs.
Simple, compound, complex
3.
The leaders are teenagers.
The leaders are responsible.
The leaders are fun.
4.
They help the children.
The children are afraid.
The children miss their parents.
they their those them
They told them that their car needed some work, so they would help them with those...
They/The leaders help the children who are afraid and miss their parents. 'their' is for 'children'
They help the children because they are afraid and miss their parents. Who is 'they'?
because they are afraid and miss their parents - adv cl talking about 'help'
They help the afraid children. ww
The children are afraid.
They help the scared children. scared -adj
They help fearful children. fearful -adj
5. The leaders like the job.
The job is hard sometimes.
The leaders like the job although the job is hard sometimes.
The leaders like the job; nevertheless, the job is hard sometimes.
adjectives
emotion thing
scared scary
bored boring
interested interesting
fascinated fascinating
excited exciting
The little boy was scared of his closet at night.
The closet was very scary looking to the boy.
The movie was boring. I was bored.
The Grade 12 student is interested in volunteering for a senior's home.
I am interested in working there.
"interested in"
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