Thursday, 3 August 2017

Sentence Combining French Fries/Coffee

1. French fries are loaded into a basket because they are white. XXX LOGIC?
White french firies are loaded into a wire basket.
French fries which are white are loaded into a wire basket.
2. Then they lowered slowly into oil.
Then they lowered slowly, and the lowering is into oil. XXX
3. Their bath which is hot crackles and foams.
Their hot bath crackles and foams.
Their bath which crackles and foams is hot.
Not only does their hot bath crackle, but also it foams. Not only... but also... COMPOUND

4. The thinly-sliced potatoes release a puff of steam.
5. They come out crispy brown and streaked with oil.
They come out crispy brown; also, they are streaked with oil.


Coffee
1. He sips at his coffee cup, and the cup is chipped along the rim.  
He sips at his coffee cup which is chipped along the rim.
2. The taste is bitter, acidic, and faitnly soapy.
The taste is bitter and acidic; also, it is faintly soapy.
The taste which is bitter and acidic is faintly soapy.
SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX
3. There is a brown film on the inside of the cup.
On the inside of the cup, there is a brown film.
There is a brown film which is on the inside of the cup.
4. He takes extra care so that he doesn't spill any on his clothes.
He doesn't spill any on his clothes because he takes extra care.
5. He is afraid that it might eat holes in the material.

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