C-43 Sentence Combining
1. Jim likes pizza. Ann likes pizza.
Jim likes pizza, and Ann likes pizza. COMPOUND,
REPETITIVE
Jim likes pizza, and Ann likes
pizza.
Jim and Ann like pizza. SIMPLE
2. Abby, Luis, and Carl play soccer
every weekend.
Abby, Luis and Carl play soccer every
weekend. OPTION, OXFORD COMMA, YOUR CHOICE
3. The bus and the skytrain arrived late
because of the snow. SIMPLE
4. Are the Jeep and Honda on sale?
Is the Jeep or Honda on sale? WILL BUY
ONLY ONE CAR
5. Kam Wong, Sara Smith, Pam Singh, and
Ron Adams were at the party. SIMPLE
GOOD STYLE? WHAT STYLE DO WE WANT?
Kam Wong and Sara Smith were at the
party; also, Pam Singh and Ron Adams were there as well. COMPOUND
STYLE COMES SENTENCE TYPES
6. His daughter, his wife, and his son
needed the car on Friday morning. SIMPLE
His daughter and his wife needed the car
on Friday morning, but his son needed it too. COMPOUND
His daughter needed the car on Friday
morning; also, his son and wife needed it that day/ the same day. COMPOUND
Although his daughter needed the car on
Friday morning, his son and wife needed it too. COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSE
C-44
1. Jim likes pizza and beer. SIMPLE
Jim likes pizza, and Jim likes beer.
GOOD CHOICE?
Jim likes pizza; also, he likes beer.
COMPOUND
Jim likes pizza; he also likes beer. COMPOUND
Even though Jim likes pizza, he also
likes beer. COMPLEX- MAYBE TOO MUCH
2. Abby plays soccer, hockey, and pool
every weekend. SIMPLE
Although Abby plays soccer and hockey
every weekend, she also plays pool. COMPLEX
Abby plays soccer and hockey every
weekend, and she plays pool too. COMPOUND
Abby plays soccer and hockey every
weekend; also, she plays pool. COMPOUND
Abby plays soccer and hockey every
weekend, also she plays pool. XXX PUNC
Abby who plays soccer and hockey every
weekend plays pool as well. COMPLEX- ADJECTIVE CL, MORE DIFFICULT
3. The bus arrived late and picked up
five angry passengers.
The bus arrived late and picked up five
passengers; the passengers were angry because the bus was late.
4. Jane parked the car and rented two
movies, so Jane walked into the video store.
Jane parked the car and walked into the
video store; then she rented two movies.
After Jane parked the car, she walked
into the video store and rented two movies.
Jane parked the car and walked into the
video store, then she rented two movies. XXX
Jane parked the car and walked into the
video store; then, she rented two movies.
Jane, who rented two movies, parked the
car and walked into the video store. COMPLEX- ADJECTIVE CLAUSE
5. I bought a red coat, a cotton shirt
and a pair of socks.
I bought a red coat and a cotton shirt;
also, I bought a pair of socks.
When I bought a red coat and a cotton
shirt, I bought a pair of socks.
After I bought a red coat and a cotton
shirt, I bought a pair of socks.
6. Vic went to a meeting on Thursday
night, a dance on Friday night, and a friend’s house on Saturday night. SIMPLE
Vic went to a meeting on Thursday night,
but he went to a dance on Friday night and a friend’s house on Saturday night.
COMPOUND
Although Vic went to a meeting on
Thursday night, he went to a dance on Friday night and a friend’s house on Saturday
night. COMPLEX
!!!SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX!!!