Tuesday, 13 June 2017

EF5/6 Sentence combining sheet 5

Sentence Combining Sheet 5

1. I like Italian cooking and Chinese cooking even though they are very different.
I like Italian and Chinese cooking even though they are very different.

2. Although they are both spicy, Italians cooks use garlic and oregano while Chinese cooks use ginger and hot pepper.
Although Italians cooks use garlic and oregano while Chinese cooks use ginger and hot pepper, they are both spicy.

You like chocolate while I like vanilla.

3. The Italians use a lot of tomato sauce unlike the Chinese who use bean sauce, soy sauce, and duck sauce.
Unlike the Italians who use a lot of tomato sauce, the Chinese use bean sauce, soy sauce, and duck sauce.


EF5/6 Another example of a conflict paragraph with ""

One conflict in the story is person vs society between the Wise Woman and the people in the town.
One conflict in the story is the person vs society conflict between the Wise Woman and the culture that she lives in.

One conflict in the story is the person vs society conflict between the Wise Woman and the government. "The authorities" wanted to crack down on the Wise Woman. The people in power were nervous about how powerful she was. The townspeople went to her for help when they were "in difficulty" instead of the government, so the government didn't like that. They were threatened by her. They were afraid they might lose their power. Therefore, they "put her in prison"in order to control her.
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EF5/6 Practice conflict paragraph with ""

One main conflict in “The Wise Woman of Cordova” was the person versus person conflict between the Wise Woman and the judge. First, the judge tried to scare the Wise Woman by saying that she was going “to be  burned”. However, the Wise Woman was not frightened. Second, the judge spoke very rudely to the Wise Woman when he called “wretched”, but she stayed calm and polite/ she talked calmly and politely. Third, the judge thought that his jail could imprison the Wise Woman; nevertheless, she escaped easily with her “ship drawn in charcoal”. These are three ways that the Wise Woman made the judge look like a fool and won the conflict.

TOPIC SENTENCE
- points
- evidence “”
- proof
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
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EXTRA GRAMMAR
She is calm.
She speaks calmly.
Stay calm.
I stayed home.
He wants to stay young.

Monday, 12 June 2017

EF5/6 Work with quotation marks

“lived a very beautiful woman.”
The Wise Woman was very beautiful.
The Wise Woman was “very beautiful” (1).
The mysterious witch was “a very beautiful woman.” (1)
The mysterious witch was “a very beautiful woman”. (1)
WRONG- TINY MISTAKE


The mysterious witch was “a very beautiful woman” (1) who lived in the town.
Is there a period in the quotation in the story?

Use quotations for special words or phrases. Words or phrases that seem important.
The Wise Woman lived “in a city” (1). NOT IMPORTANT

People thought that she was “in contact with the devil.” (1)

KEEP IT SHORT!!! JUST QUOTE A FEW WORDS.

HELPFUL
“always helped those in difficulty” (1)
The witch was always happy to assist anyone who was “in difficulty” (1) in the town.

“young girls were lonely and wanted a husband”
She found husbands for single girls who “were lonely”.(1)

JUST A FEW WORDS. LESS IS MORE.
LIKE SALT.


POWERFUL
“with her magic powers she fulfilled nonetheless their wishes”
She used “her magic powers” to grant people’s desires.
She used “her magic powers” to give people what they need.


“appear at the same time to different people, in different places”
She would “appear to different people, in different places”. NO GOOD, WAY TOO LONG

“at the same time”
People in the town could see her at various locations all over town “at the same time”.

Also, the witch could be seen “flying through the air” like a phantom.
She was mysterious so that people thought she had some ways to “contact with the devil”.

Nowadays, people still mention her whenever someone requests “an impossible favour”.


The wise woman helped the miners when they were not happy when they had “no silver in their mines”.

She was a “tricky” person.  XXX
She was a tricky person.

She was a “mysterious” person.  XXX
She was a mysterious person.

She told the judge to “watch” her as she sailed away.

As she sailed away, she “laughed at the bewildered judge” who didn’t understand how she could escape.
As she went through the wall, the judge was “bewildered” because he didn’t understand how she could escape.



“the witch had escaped”

MYSTERIOUS
“strange black eyes”
“no one knew who she was or where she had come from”

“in contact with the devil”

Friday, 9 June 2017

English 11/12 Introvert/ extrovert

http://www.myersbriggs.org/my-mbti-personality-type/mbti-basics/extraversion-or-introversion.htm?bhcp=1


Test for fun!
http://www.humanmetrics.com/cgi-win/jtypes2.asp


Susan Cain Quiet: The Power of Introverts in a World that Can’t Stop Talking
TED Talk “The Power of Introverts” 

Quiet Revolution website test: http://www.quietrev.com/the-introvert-test/




Thursday, 8 June 2017

EF 5/6 Sentence Combining "Friday Night"

1. The teenagers meet for a barbecue party at the river after school.
The teenagers meet  after school for a barbecue party at the river.

prepositional phrases 'for a party' 'after school'

2. Some older people bring cars, park on the beach, and turn up their radios.
Some older people bring cars; they park on the beach and turn up their radios.
Some older people bring cars, and they park on the beach and turn up their radios.
Some older people who bring cars and park on the beach turn up their radios.

3. Others bring portable tape decks, and they also bring tapes that supply hours of music.

4. Everyone brings enough food to feed twice the number present; nevertheless, there will be none left.
Even though everyone brings enough food to feed twice the number present, there will be none left.

5. It is a typical Friday night for these kids at this time of the year in this town.

6. They all enjoy the temporary freedom to eat, listen to music, and be together without direction from parents, teachers or employers.

EF5/6 Causative Verbs

Causative Verbs


Causative verbs make other verbs act.  They force actions to occur.

Both of the previous sentences contained causative verbs.

“Causative verbs make other verbs act.  They force actions to occur.”

The most frequently used causative verbs are as follows:

help, allow, invite, require, motivate, get, convince, hire, assist, encourage, permit, employ, force, tell, ask.

These verbs are followed by a noun or pronoun followed by an infinitive.

“She allows her pet cockatiel to perch on the windowsill.
“We hired a carpenter to build a new patio on our house."
“I help my friend to fix his computer.”

Four other causative verbs do not follow this pattern.  The causative verbs help, have, make and let are followed by a noun/pronoun and the base form of the verb (which is actually an infinitive with the "to" left off).

“She makes him do his homework.”
“He lets his daughter use his camera.
“The boy helps his mother fold the laundry.

Notice help can be used either way.


help
The little kids help each other to build/build a snowman.

allow
I won't allow my son to eat ice cream for breakfast.

invite
She invited her family to come to her graduation.

require
The job requires you to work nights.

motivate
The coach motivates his team to win.

get
Can I get you to pick up some coffee beans for me?

convince
I convinced my son that a ghost is under his bed.

hire
Did you hire a cleaner to clean your house?

assist
The salesperson can assist to choose an iphone.

encourage
I encourage my serious students to speak English every day.

permit
The police don't permit you to speed. overspeed

employ
Her tourism company employs ten new part-timers to work during the summer.

force
I force my son to play/practice piano for 15 minutes every day.

tell
You tell your son to get married soon.

ask
Can I ask you to open the window, please?

OTHER SYTLE
have
She had the workers move her piano.

make
You can't make a cat do anything.

let
Will you let your daughter go to summer camp this year?

Wednesday, 7 June 2017

EF5/6 Roses group discussion questions

“Roses Sing on New Snow”
Discussion Questions

1.  What is the setting of the story?
2.  Why does Maylin cook in her father’s restaurant?
3.  Is Maylin a weak or a strong person?
4.  What are some possible reasons Maylin named her dish “Roses Sing on New Snow”?
5.  What does Maylin mean when she says her dish is a product of the new world?
6.  What are some reasons the governor couldn’t cook “Roses Sing on New Snow” the same as Maylin did?
FOR LATER

7.  What theme (main idea or comment on human nature) is the story conveying?  Why did Paul Yee write the story, do you think?

EF 5/6 Sentence combining- subordination

adverb clauses- because, if , when

adjective clauses- who, that, which

noun clauses- that, what, why
verbs- think, say, feel, know, believe, understand

"She doesn't know what he is talking about."

Ex 67 p149

1. The television has a 35-inch screen.
I bought it yesterday.

adj cl
The television which/that I bought yesterday has a 35-inch screen.
The television I bought yesterday has a 35-inch screen. VERY NATURAL SOUNDING
Yesterday, I bought a television which/that has a 35-inch screen.

2. Melba's joints hurt whenever it's going to rain.
Whenever it's going to rain, Melba's joints hurt.

6. The baby started to cry just as the movie began.

7. Cac has been so happy ever since she met Andrew.
Cac has been so happy after she met Andrew.
Cac has been so happy since/because she met Andrew
Cac has been so happy until she met Andrew.

10. If you want to win the 6/49, buy a ticket.


Ex68
1. The Chang Jiang River, whose source flows into the East China Sea, is in China.

2. Dorin is as tall as his sister.
SIMILES
My grandmother is as deaf as a post.
Her son is as thin as a dime.
He is as old as the hills.
Your daughter is as smart as a whip.
smart = intelligent, hurt
I am as blind as a bat.

3. Brian brought home a dozen roses because he wanted to apologize to his wife.
Brian wanted to apologize to his wife so that he brought home a dozen roses.

4. You are special because you listen to everything I say.

USE THESE SENTENCES STYLES AS MODELS

7. We had to wait an hour before the box office opened.
We had to wait an hour until the box office opened.

box office= place that sells tickets for shows

8. Wally needs to go to a quiet place where the only sounds are made by nature.

6. so...that
It is so hot that we have to wear shorts.
She was so mad that she started an argument with her husband.
The plot of the movie was so complicated that it was hard to understand.
He was so tired that he fell asleep at the dinner table.

You fall asleep.
You feel sleepy.

10. Whatever you decide, we will stand by you.
We will stand by you whatever you decide. 


Eng 11/12 Women in Trades

http://www.cbc.ca/thesundayedition/documentaries/2014/06/15/younger-women-in-trades/

Tuesday, 6 June 2017

EF 5/6 Sentence Combining

Different sentence styles- variety of sentences

SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX

Know More English p140

Sentence Combining-

2 ways to combine sentences
1) Coordination p141

co = together, same level


XXXXX YYYYYY

COMPOUND ,SOBA ,FANBOYS

, so   , or   , but     , and

; semicolon pp110-111

; however,
; therefore,
; otherwise,
; moreover,
; at first,
; for example,
; on the other hand,
; unfortunately,
; sadly,

COORDINATION- COMPOUND SENTENCE
pp140-148

either... or
Either I will go to Italy or I will stay home. COMPOUND

I will go to either Italy or Spain. SIMPLE

CHOICE- BOTH ARE OK

neither...nor
I like neither English nor French. SIMPLE ***

I will not go to Italy nor will I go to Spain. VERY STRANGE
neither...nor VERY LOW FREQUENCY- FORGET ABOUT IT


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SUBORDINATION p148

sub = under, lower

HIGHER LOWER
MAIN SUBORDINATE

COMPLEX SENTENCE- adverb clause, adjective clause, noun clause

*** SIMPLE COMPOUND COMPLEX ***


Ex 62 p142
COMPOUND
1. Boris tried counting sheep. He was too tired.
Boris tried counting sheep, but he was too tired.
Boris tried counting sheep; however, he was too tired.

3. I could eat a thick steak, and I could enjoy a large chocolate sundae.
I could either eat a thick steak, or I could enjoy a large chocolate sundae.
I could eat a thick steak; in the mean time, I could enjoy a large chocolate sundae.
in the mean time = while you're waiting

I could eat a thick steak; at the same time, I could enjoy a large chocolate sundae.


4.Sean is very tall, and he is big-boned.

5. Dianne had a pounding migraine headache, so she couldn't go to school.
Dianne had a pounding migraine headache; therefore, she couldn't go to school.

6. John is extremely well-to-do, but he never flaunts his wealth.

well-to-do = rich

Ex.63 
1. The sky rumbled for a long time; then the thunderstorm began.
The sky rumbled for a long time; then, the thunderstorm began. VERY SMALL MISTAKE

2. Many people enjoy lamb. It has a unique taste.
Many people enjoy lamb, for it has a unique taste. VERY STRANGE

Lamb has a unique taste, so many people enjoy it.

3. You can use my book tonight, but (you) bring it back tomorrow, please. COMPOUND
You can use my book tonight but bring it back tomorrow, please. SIMPLE

4. The radio station announced the winning name; unfortunately, it was not mine.

6. Don't look directly at the eclipse, or you will damage your eyes.

, for UNUSUAL WORD

welder's mask

10. Dorota will bring a salad, and her sister will bring a salad.
  Dorota will bring a salad; however, her sister will also bring a salad.

Dorota and her sister will both bring salads. 
Dorota and her sister both will bring salads. 
SIMPLE

Joe and his brother both have six kids. They have 12 kids between them.

between them = put together




English 11/12 Using quoted material

The girl gave up on her desire to be independent. “I didn’t protest even in my heart. Maybe it was true.” She accepted the role laid out for her by her family and society. XXX
INCORPORATE QUOTED MATERIAL INTO OUR OWN SENTENCES

“I didn’t protest even in my heart. Maybe it was true.”
“didn’t protest” IMPORTANT WORDS OR PHRASE

When the family dismissed the narrator, she accepted his approbation and “didn’t protest” any further. INCORPORATED
KEEP IT SHORT (2-4 words)

The father dismissed the narrator as being ”just a girl”, and this hurt her sense of self-worth.


“I thought it was just a girl.”
The father dismissed the narrator as being ”just a girl.”.

“their eyes burning, clear gold”
The narrator was unnerved by the foxes who stared at her, “their eyes burning, clear gold”. This shows that the foxes wanted to bite her which symbolizes the threat the girl was under from her family.

QUOTATIONS ARE LIKE SALT IN FOOD.

“I didn’t protest even in my heart.”

When the father dismissed the girl, she “didn’t protest even in [her] heart.”

[ ] square brackets

“[Trump] is a orange-haired barbarian, ‘a short-fingered vulgarian’ who is a menace to any woman within arms’ reach.”

THE TEACHER HAS TO LET YOU SEE THE TEXT IF THEY WANT YOU TO USE QUOTATION MARKS.

MAKE NOTES- CRITICAL TO ACADEMIC SUCCESS
YOU WON’T REMEMBER!! WRITE IT DOWN.

QUOTED MATERIAL IS ONE-USE.
“just a girl”

LIKE DENTAL FLOSS- ONE TIME ONLY






Monday, 5 June 2017

EF 5/6 Sentence Combining "Parable 2"

Find the most important new parts of the sentences.

Combine them together into one good sentence:
SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX

Avoid repetition.


2. The birds dip and soar in the chill wind, and their wings are extended as they swoop to earth together.

The birds dip and soar in the chill wind; also, their wings are extended as they swoop to earth together.

The birds whose wings are extended dip and soar in the chill wind as they swoop to earth together.

The birds whose wings are extended (adj cl) dip and soar in the chill wind as they swoop to earth together (adverb cl). COMPLEX- VERY HIGH LEVEL

The birds dip and soar in the chill wind with their extended wings; then they swoop to earth together.
COMPOUND

3. They are just in time for Flying School which tries to teach them about boats, docks, and survival. SERIES

They are just in time for Flying School which tries to teach them about boats, docks and survival.

xxx, yyy, and zzz. OXFORD COMMA - YOUR CHOICE

The little kids like cheese sandwiches, ham sandwiches, and peanut butter and jam sandwiches. HELPS TO MAKE IT LESS CONFUSING- SIMPLE

They are just in time for Flying School because it tries to teach them about boats, docks and survival. TELLS US WHY- COMPLEX

*****************************
SUPER-DUPER IMPORTANT
!!!SIMPLE, COMPOUND, COMPLEX!!!
*****************************

4. An old bird advises them, "Stay close to shore, and watch for human trash that drifts in with the waves." COMPOUND
An old bird advises them to stay close to shore, and watch for human trash that drifts in with the waves.SIMPLE
Her mom told her, "Come home after work."
Her mom told her to come home after work.
SIMPLE

' "

She said, "I read 'Trial in the Bank Saloon' yesterday."
She said that she read "Trial in the Bank Saloon" yesterday. EASIER, LOOKS CLEANER

She said, "Watch out for the bear!"

5. The gulls flap/ are flapping their wings restlessly, but their instructor reminds them that they should forget their dreams.

The gulls flap their wings restlessly because their instructor reminds them that they should forget their dreams. CONSEQUENCE, COMPLEX

The gulls' instructor reminds them that they should forget their dreams, so they flap their wings restlessly. COMPOUND

The gulls' instructor reminds them to forget their dreams, so they flap their wings restlessly. NICE VARIATION, GOOD CHOICE


VARIETY- DIFFERENT STYLES, GOOD MIX OF SENTENCES

6. The instructor adds, "Gulls must live in flocks close to the docks."
The instructor adds that gulls must live in flocks  and close to the docks.

7. "Gulls cannot fly high and free above the open and rolling sea."

8. As the class follows the teacher searching for breakfast, one bird lags behind and remembers a private dream.

The class follows the teacher to search for breakfast, but one bird that remembers a private dream lags behind.

to search = infinitive to searched, to searches, to searching


Eng 11/12 "No Desk Job for Me" CBC Documentary



“No Desk Job for Me: Young Women in Trades”

Questions for discussion and writing

1.    Why are women getting into the trades?

2.    Should women work in the trades?

3.    What are some challenges faced by the women in the documentary?

4.    In what ways are women better than men in the trades?

5.    What is the significance of having 15% women in a trade?

6.    FOR ALL STUDENTS, MEN AND WOMEN

Would you get into the trades?  Why or why not?

English 11/12 "Where's Your Husband"

http://www.cbc.ca/news/canada/women-agriculture-barriers-1.3878774