E`12 Sentence combining

The Transformation

The work crew arrived. KERNEL- centre, base

We arrived early.

We arrived with mops.

We arrived with buckets.

We arrived with supplies.

We arrived with mops, we arrived with buckets, and we arrived with supplies. REPETITION

We arrived with mops, buckets, and supplies. PARALLEL

The supplies were for cleaning.

We arrived with mops, buckets, and supplies, and the supplies were for cleaning.

We arrived with mops, buckets, and cleaning supplies.

We arrived with paint.

We arrived with mops, buckets, cleaning supplies, and paint. LIKE THIS STYLE?

We arrived with mops, buckets, and cleaning supplies; also, we arrived with paint. LIKE THIS STYLE?

FULLY COMBINE INTO CONCISE, DENSE SENTENCES IN A VARIETY OF STYLES- simple, compound, complex

2. We found Judy wandering in the bedroom and worrying

We found Judy wandering in the bedroom; she was worrying

We found Judy wandering in the bedroom, and she was worrying

We found Judy, who was wandering in the bedroom, worrying about her decision to buy the little house.

3. Everyone chose a job and began.

After everyone chose a job, we began.

Everyone began after choosing a job.

MUST BE ABLE TO CONTROL YOUR SENTENCES- YOU’RE THE BOSS!