E10/ EF7 Process for writing

PROCESS- STEP BY STEP

1.Analyze the question

Why did the guards in the Stanford Prison Experiment act the way they did?


psychology, university, not a real prison, mock prison,

What happened?
WHY?

paragraph

Make sure you are on-topic. answering the question, addressing the question


2. Generate ideas -PLAN

WHY?

- given symbols of authority, given sunglasses, handcuffs
- scenario was realistic- like a real prison
- no rules- make strong choices, no limit
- people are evil, always do the wrong thing

3. Organize- TIME, SPACE, IMPORTANCE
Most imporrtant last

4. Rough copy

TOPIC SENTENCE
mirror the question, writing prompt

Why did the guards in the Stanford Prison Experiment act the way they did?

BASIC/ SIMPLE
The guards in the Stanford Prison Experiment acted the way they did for three reasons.

CHANGE VOCAB- USE SYNONYMS
The guards jailer/ applicants/participants who were acting in the roles of being guards in the Stanford Prison Experiment acted the way they did treated the prisoners badly for three reasons.

ON-TRACK, CONFIDENT

If the first sentence is not on-topic, then the paragraph is lost.