1. David and Peter went on a camping trip. KERNEL
David and Peter went on a camping trip to the White Mountains in New Hampshire in June. SIMPLE
In June, David and Peter went on a camping trip to the White Mountains in New Hampshire.
David and Peter went on a camping trip, and it was to the White Mountains in New Hampshire in June. COMPOUND ,SOBA
David and Peter went on a camping trip which was to the White Mountains in New Hampshire in June. COMPLEX SENTENCE- ADJECTIVE CLAUSE
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2.They checked all their equipment before they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains. COMPLEX SENTENCES- ADVERB CLAUSE
After they checked all their equipment, they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains.
They got into the car for the long ride to the mountains after they checked all their equipment.
COMPLEX SENTENCES- ADVERB CLAUSES
They checked all their equipment after they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains. WRONG MEANING
They checked all their equipment; after, they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains. RIGHT MEANING
They checked all their equipment; afterwards, they got into the car for the long ride to the mountains. RIGHT MEANING
After they arrived at the campground in the late afternoon, they set up camp near a small stream. COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSES
They arrived at the campground in the late afternoon; afterwards, they set up camp near a small stream. COMPOUND
They set up camp near a small stream when they arrived at the campground in the late afternoon.
They set up camp near a small stream after they arrived at the campground in the late afternoon. COMPLEX- ADVERB SENTENCES
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4. David put up the tent while Peter cooked supper over the fire. COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSE
While David put up the tent, Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent XXX Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent, and Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent, so Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent; Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent; therefore, Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent; at the same time, Peter cooked supper over the fire.
David put up the tent; meanwhile, Peter cooked supper over the fire.
5. After they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they became nervous because they began to hear animal noises. COMPLEX SENTENCE- ADVERB CLAUSES
Because they began to hear animal noises after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they became nervous.
They became nervous after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset because they began to hear animal noises.
After they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they began to hear animal noises, so they became nervous. COMPOUND COMPLEX
They began to hear animal noises after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, so they became nervous. COMPOUND COMPLEX
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5. After they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they became nervous because they began to hear animal noises. COMPLEX SENTENCE- ADVERB CLAUSES
Because they began to hear animal noises after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they became nervous.
They became nervous after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset because they began to hear animal noises.
After they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, they began to hear animal noises, so they became nervous. COMPOUND COMPLEX
They began to hear animal noises after they crawled into their sleeping bags at sunset, so they became nervous. COMPOUND COMPLEX
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