SIMPLE
COMPOUND
COMPLEX
sentence combining
KERNEL- usually the first sentence, main
sentence to build on
1.French fries are loaded into a basket.
KERNEL
2.The French fries are white. FIND NEW INFORMATION
White French fried are loaded into a
basket. GOOD
French fries are loaded into a basket,
and the French fries are white. REPETITIVE, UNNECESARILY OVERWRITTEN
3.The basket is wire.
White French fried are loaded into a wire
basket. NICE SOLUTION
4.Then they are lowered. KERNEL
5.The lowering is slow. lowering is noun
form of lowered
slow
is new information
6.The lowering is into oil.
Then they are lowered, and the lowering
is slow. REPETITIVE
slow is an adjective. We need the adverb: slowly.
Then they are lowered slowly
The lowering is into oil. NEW INFORMATION
Then they are lowered slowly into oil.
GOOD SOLUTION
7.Their bath crackles.
8.Their bath foams.
9.Their bath is hot. hot is an adjective
Their hot bath crackles and foams.
SIMPLE
Their bath crackles and foams, and it is
hot. COMPOUND
Their bath crackles, foams and is hot.
SIMPLE
Their bath crackles and foams because it
is hot. COMPLEX
Their bath which is hot crackles and
foams. COMPLEX
10.The potatoes release a puff.
11.The potatoes are thinly-sliced. thinly-sliced
is like an adjectice
12.The puff is steam.
The potatoes which are thinly-sliced
release a steam puff.
The thinly-sliced potatoes release a puff
of steam.
steam puff , thinking cream puff
They come out crispy brown and streaked
with oil. SIMPLE
They come out crispy brown and also streaked
with oil.
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