Tuesday, 10 February 2015

E10/EF7 Example paragraph

        The mood in the story “What Happened during the Ice Storm” changed very quickly within the opening sentences of the first paragraph.  The first few references to the ice were positive, talking about how “beautiful” (265) it was.  The people saw the ice as shining “like glass” as it covered everything.  However, almost immediately, the people changed their perception of the silver thaw as the tree branches snapped under the weight.  Also, what was earlier described as enchanting became “blurred” as the rain made it hard to see.  Finally, the farmers saw the ice as a threat to their livestock and protected them from the inclement weather.  Clearly, the ice rain which was seen as pretty rapidly became a danger in the opinions of the public.


     

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