My grandmother had a beautiful face when she was old. First, her hair was short and curly. She dyed it pink even though it was naturally
silver. Also, she had beautiful brown eyes
like dark chocolate. They were big and
bright. Her skin was soft and yellow,
and she had laugh lines on her cheeks.
Finally, she had a big mouth with pink lips and white teeth. She was always smiling. My grandmother looked great even when she was
elderly.
Topic Sentence My grandmother had a beautiful face when she
was old.
Supporting Sentences First, her hair was short and
curly. She dyed it pink even though it
was naturally silver. Also, she had beautiful
brown eyes like dark chocolate. They
were big and bright. Her skin was soft
and yellow, and she had laugh lines on her cheeks. Finally, she had a big mouth with pink lips
and white teeth. She was always smiling.
Concluding Sentence My grandmother looked great even when she
was elderly.
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