Tuesday, 30 September 2014

English 11 Skiing sentence combining

Skiing
1.     The slopes on Mt. Whistler are covered with skiers who are laughing, yelling, and enjoying themselves.
The slopes at Whistler are covered with skiers who are laughing, yelling, and enjoying themselves.
The skiers who cover the slopes at Whistler are laughing, yelling, and enjoying themselves.

2.     Light snow which is falling and swirling in the air adds centimetres to the base, ensuring good skiing in the future.
Light snow which is falling and swirling in the air adds centimetres to the base; this ensures good skiing in the future.
Good future skiing is ensured by the light snow which swirls in the air.  It falls, adding centimetres to the base.
3.     The village is experiencing large crowds of tourists, fabulous weather, and a growing international reputation.
The village has a growing international reputation for fabulous weather; therefore, it is experiencing large crowds of tourists.
***The village is experiencing large crowds of tourists due to its growing international reputation for fabulous weather.
4.     People come from the US, Europe, and Japan to ski the deep powder, enjoy the social life, and get tanned in the sunshine.
***People come from the US, Europe, and Japan to get tanned in the sunshine while skiing the deep powder; also, they enjoy the social life.


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