Then
they are lowered slowly into oil.
Their
hot bath crackles and foams.
Their
bath which is hot crackle; also, it foams.
unnecessarily
complicated, overwritten
The
thinly-sliced potatoes release a puff of steam.
They
come out crispy brown and streaked with oil.
He
sips at his coffee cup which is chipped along the rim.
The
taste is bitter, acidic, and faintly soapy.
There
is a brown film on the inside of his cup.
He
takes extra care so that he doesn’t spill any on his clothes.
He
is afraid that it might eat holes in the material.
He
is afraid about it eating holes in the material.
harder level
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