E10/ EF7 sentence writing point

for example There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. For example, Sophie’s foot, Dakar’s cat and the Great Horses. FIX #1 There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. For example, there are Sophie’s foot, Dakar’s cat and the Great Horses. FIX #2 There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel, for example Sophie’s foot, Dakar’s cat and the Great Horses. There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. First, Sophie’s foot. FIX #1 There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. First, there is Sophie’s foot. FIX #2 There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. First is Sophie’s foot. FIX #3 There are many instances of intolerance in the first four chapters of the novel. The first one is Sophie’s foot. SIMPLE SENTENCE- CLEAR, DIRECT First, there is Sophie’s foot. First is Sophie’s foot. The first one is Sophie’s foot. Sentence fragment- missing a subject or a verb