INCORPORATE!!
“tiny robot mice”
One example of personification is the “tiny
robot mice” (1) that clean the house.
“clever”
The “clever” (4) fire burned the house
down.
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stylistic changes
“silhouette in paint” (1)
On the outside wall of the house were
five “silhouette[s] in paint” (1) that were caused by what Bradbury suggests
was a nuclear explosion.
Stephen Harper said, “I was talking to [Obama]
and he wants to meet next week.”
The house was standing in the middle of
the “ruined city”. (1)
Later in the morning, the “angry mice” (2)
came out to clean up the house.
After the fire broke out, “scurrying
water rats” (3) tried to put it out.
The “bared skeleton” (4) of the house
burned as the fire consumed it.
The inside of the house was “maniac
confusion” (4) as the robots tried to fight the fire.
The stove cooked food at a “psychopathic
rate” (4) while the house burned down around it.
The cleaning robots were “darting
bravely” (4) to clean up the mess caused by the raging fire.
The cleaning robots “dart[ed] bravely” (4)
to clean up the mess caused by the raging fire.
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