Process 1.
Analyze
2.
BS
3.
OL
4.
RC
5.
Edit
6.
GC
How would you have acted if you were a guard
or a prisoner?
Stanford experiment, guard, nice
persuasive-IMPORTANCE
BS/OL
1.rmemebr that it was just an experiemtn
and not real, lose perspective
2.-punisgment doesn’t work, be a role model
for pepopel who show bad bheavipour
3.-my gfmailt raised is like that to try to
be sympathetic-show repect to weaker poepler
RC
How would you have acted if you were a guard
or a prisoner?
Topic sentence to reflect question, mirror
vocabulary, on-topic!
If
I were a guard in the Stanford Prison Experiment, I would have been much kinder
than the real guards were. First of all,
I’m confident that I would have remembered that it was just an experiment and
not a real situation. I would have kept
reminding myself that I was not a real guard and that the others were not
really prisoners. Secondly, I truly
believe that punishment does not help people to change their behavior. If I had acted as a compassionate role model,
maybe some of the prisoners would followed my example of how to be a decent person
to people who are weaker than them. Most importantly, I was raised with strong
role models who demonstrated kindness and respect to people who were weaker than
them. Although sometimes people take
advantage of kindness, mostly people respond well to kindness and fairness. In short, if I ever find myself in a similar situation
to the prison experiment, I am confident I will treat the people acting as
prisoners with decency and respect. However,
the truth is that most average people, who are just like me, don’t.
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