Thursday, 2 August 2012

The Final Game sent comb test


  1. Students, coaches and parents have gathered for the provincial final in senior girls’ basketball.
Students, coaches and parents have gathered for the senior girls’ basketball provincial final.

  1. Hundreds of fans come to the arena from the towns with teams in the provincials.
Hundreds of fans come to the arena from the towns that have teams in the provincials.

  1. In the arena, there is a display of colourful banners and people who are cheering and chanting for victory.
In the arena, there is a display of colourful banners and people; the people are cheering and chanting for victory.

  1. The players enter the floor area from the dressing rooms; when they begin to warm up, they receive a standing ovation from their supporters.
After the players enter the floor area from the dressing rooms, they begin to warm up; then they receive a standing ovation from their supporters.
After the players enter the floor area from the dressing rooms, they receive a standing ovation from their supporters as they begin to warm up.

  1. Both teams are considered victors to their fans for getting to the finals whatever the outcome.
Whatever the outcome, both teams are considered victors to their fans for getting to the finals.
To their fans, both teams are considered victors for getting to the finals whatever the outcome.

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