Monday, 22 February 2021

EF34 11:00am Feb22

 

 

Good morning, everybody.

We will get started at 11:00.

 

The location in Canada for our virtual sightseeing is Newfoundland.

 

breaching whale

 

Today’s agenda:

1.    Review Quiz #2 on compound sentences

2.    Continue with paragraphs

 

Test#1 – write a short paragraph. Wednesday

 

 

Paragraphs – 5-8 sentence together, writing about one topic

                     -150-200 words English 10, 11, 12

                     -English Foundations 3/4 - shorter is ok, 100-150 words

 

 

 

 

Gold

Topic sentence- introduces the topic of the paragraph ‘gold’, ‘valued’

-always begin your paragraph with a topic sentence

Supporting sentences- exaplain the reasons why, discuss the topic in detail

Concluding sentence- restate the topic sentence, wraps up the paragraph

Gold is a precious metal that is valued for two important reasons. First of all, gold is beautiful and does not corrode. Therefore, it is good for jewelry, coins, and ornaments. Gold never needs to be polished and will remain beautiful forever. For example, an antique gold coin looks as beautiful today as the day it was made. Secondly, gold is very useful to industry and science. It is used in many applications, such as photography and dentistry. Also, gold is used in astronauts' suits. Astronauts wear gold-plated heat shields for protection when they go outside spaceships in space. In conclusion, gold is treasured not only for its beauty but also for its usefulness.

114 words – perfect length for EF34

 

Next week, we will start working on how to write short paragraphs.

Good challenge – use our sentences to write down our ideas

We will learn four kinds of paragraphs:

1.narrative paragraph – tell a story

2.descriptive paragraph – describe something

3.process/expository paragraph – teach how to do something, explain how something works

4.persuasive paragraph – give an opinion, convince

MAYBE – 5. definition paragraph – tell what something is

 

Quiz #2- Compound Sentences

 

Write a compound sentence for each:

e.g.    dog and

I have a dog, and he is loyal.

 

                     1. drive                            but

SV, SOBA SV.

I know how to drive, but I do not have a car.

 

2. mountain                  so

I love to hike, so I will go to the mountain tomorrow.

 

3. try                                and

Gloria tried hard in the math class, and she succeeded.

 

4. bought                        but

I bought new leather boots yesterday, but I will return them.

 

5. weekend                   so

It rained all weekend, so mostly we stayed inside arguing.

 

6. fix                                or

Can you fix my phone, or do I have to buy a new one?

 

 

Please write any sentences you would like to discuss in the chat:

1.    I bought a new clothes, but it was expensive. #

I bought a new guitar, but it was expensive.

I bought new clothes, but they were expensive.

 

2.    We have to plant something on the mountain, so we need to purchase some seeds.

3.    I'm free this weekend, so let's go to party.

Let’s go to a party. (noun)

Let’s go party. (verb)

go + verb

I have to go buy some groceries.

 

4.    I bought some vegetables yesterday, but I did not buy any meat.

5.    He fix study scheldule or he doesn't stusy. meaning?

 

6.    I had breakfast in a fancy cafe, but even sitting there was extremely expensive. punc

7.    I can drive a car, but I cannot ride a bike. art

8.    The mountains are beautiful, so  they are tall. Logic

The mountains are tall, so they are beautiful.

 

9.    I try to read English, and I try to speak it, too.

Maria plays soccer. She plays volleyball, too.

 

10.                       It is the weekend, so we will go to the park.

11.                       I will fix my computer, or I will buy a new one.

12.                       I brought fruits some fruit yesterday, but it's not good. #

13.                       I will try newe soup, and I make it cookies. RW

14.                       Please fix it or throw it away. simple sentence

15.                       Every weekend, I go hiking, so I take a lot of pictures with my  cell phone. prep

16.                       I can't wait for next weekend, so I can enjoy it with my family.

I can't wait for next weekend so that I can enjoy it with my family.

complex sentence

17.                       I want to make some food, but I don't have any ideas.

18.                       I can drive, but my sisters dose not. verbs sp

I can drive, but my sisters can not.

I drive, but my sisters do not.

19.                       I  like bananas, but I can’t eat them because I’m allergic.

compound complex – teach next week

 

20.                       I bought a book for my son yesterday , but it’s the wrong book.

21.                       I learnt English but, I can't speak fluently. XXX

I learned English, but I can't speak fluently.

22.                       I have to fix my fence ,or hire someone to fix it . XXX

I have to fix my fence or hire someone to fix it. simple SVV

I have to fix my fence, or I will hire someone to fix it. compound

 

23.                       I want to go out hiking, so I will go with friends.

24.                       She will came late today or, she won't came. vf

She will come late today, or she won't come.

 

25.                       I was tired work yesterday, but were not busy. XXX

I was tired at work yesterday, but we were not busy.

 

 

agr – subject verb agreement

My sister go to school. agr

My sister goes to school.

 

My brothers lives in Iran. agr

My brothers live in Iran.

My brother live in Iran. agr

My brother lives in Iran.

 

siblings – both sexes, brothers and sisters

 

Jun has four siblings: three sisters and one brother.

 

throw/ throw away

You throw a ball for a dog.

You throw away garbage.

Maria threw a frisbee to her daughter.

Maria threw away some old clothes.

Dogs can so athletic compared to humans.

 

can’t  ‘ apostrophe

Apostrophes are used for two reasons:

1.    shows possession

2.    shows a contraction

 

1.    possession –  a person owns something

Marwa’s new phone is nice.

My sister’s new baby is ugly.

 

2.    can not -  can’t

will not – won’t

 

*** Always confusing to people:

its it’s

its – possession, no apostrophe (special)

it’s – it is

 

The dog is biting its tail. possession

It’s a very cute dog. it is

 

 

Wednesday –

Test#1 – short paragraph (50m)

          I will give you an easy general topic. You will plan and write a short paragraph of about 100 words.

e.g. Discuss how the US dropping the gold standard in the 1970s has affected world economics. Just joking!

What is your favourite holiday? Why?

 

PLAN

Decide on your holiday. Thanksgiving

Aim for three reasons. Three is a good number to shoot for.

1.    family gathers together

2.    big feast, lots of different kinds of food

3.    not commercialized like Christmas, just about family and food and being thankful

 

WRITE

Topic sentence-

Supporting sentences

Concluding sentence

 

 

Continue with this tomorrow.

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