Monday, 25 February 2013

E10 example decent paragraph


Process                 1. Analyze
                             2. BS
                             3. OL
                             4. RC
                             5. Edit
                             6. GC

How would you have acted if you were a guard or a prisoner?

Stanford experiment, guard, nice
persuasive-IMPORTANCE

BS/OL

1.rmemebr that it was just an experiemtn and not real, lose perspective

2.-punisgment doesn’t work, be a role model for pepopel who show bad bheavipour

3.-my gfmailt raised is like that to try to be sympathetic-show repect to weaker poepler


RC
How would you have acted if you were a guard or a prisoner?

Topic sentence to reflect question, mirror vocabulary, on-topic!








          If I were a guard in the Stanford Prison Experiment, I would have been much kinder than the real guards were.  First of all, I’m confident that I would have remembered that it was just an experiment and not a real situation.  I would have kept reminding myself that I was not a real guard and that the others were not really prisoners.  Secondly, I truly believe that punishment does not help people to change their behavior.  If I had acted as a compassionate role model, maybe some of the prisoners would followed my example of how to be a decent person to people who are weaker than them.   Most importantly, I was raised with strong role models who demonstrated kindness and respect to people who were weaker than them.  Although sometimes people take advantage of kindness, mostly people respond well to kindness and fairness.  In short, if I ever find myself in a similar situation to the prison experiment, I am confident I will treat the people acting as prisoners with decency and respect.  However, the truth is that most average people, who are just like me, don’t.

Wednesday, 20 February 2013

EF 2/3 Adverb clauses


simple sentence
subject plus verb, subject plus predicate

compound sentence
sv + sv             FANBOYS, SOBA, ; however,

complex sentence
main clause plus subordinate clause
simple sentence plus adverb, adjective or noun clause

adverb clause- because, if , when,
I am wearing a sweater because it is cold.
Because it is cold, I am wearing a sweater. COMPLEX
It is cold, so I am wearing a sweater. COMPOUND
We can’t go shopping because I am tired.

If you are busy, we won’t go shopping.
We won’t go shopping if you are busy.

When it rains, I stay home.
I stay home when it rains.

Call me when you get home.
Call me as soon as you get home. IMMEDIATELY
He was watching TV while she was cooking supper.

after
The kids do their homework after supper after they have supper.
After I came to Vancouver, I found an apartment.
before
Put your hat on before you go outside.
Before you take English 4, you must pass English 3.

MOST IMPORTANT when, before, after, because, if

so that
She is saving money so that she can go to Europe. COMPLEX
She is saving money, so she can go to Europe. COMPOUND
whenever
I meet my brother for coffee whenever he comes to Vancouver.

whenever
You can go to SHEC whenever you have time.

as ___ as ___
She can speak English as well as you can.
My son is as tall as his sister is.
His business is not as busy as it was last year.
My son is not as tall as I am.

although, even though, though= the same meaning

main clause                             adverb clause
She is walking in the park      even though it is raining.

Although English is sometimes tricky for her, she still keeps on learning it.

I drank the coffee though it was cold.


since=because
I am wearing a hat since it’s cold.

since=from that time
She has lived in Vancouver since she came here in 2000.


He spoke slowly so that she would understand.

EF2/3 Idiomatic Uses of Prepositions- phrasal verbs


Common Idiomatic Uses of Prepositions

Write in the meaning of each idiom next to the sentence.

1.    Some friends dropped in on us last night.
2.    The plane took off at exactly ten o'clock.
3.    I came across an old friend on Fifth Avenue yesterday.                                 
4.    He is a man that everyone looks up to.
5.    We waited until ten o'clock, but she never showed up.
6.    They set out at dawn on their camping trip.
7.    The lawyer will draw up the contract tomorrow.
8.    In this code, each number stands for a letter of the alphabet.
9.    Many students have dropped out of our class.
10. No one knows how she managed to get away from the police.
11. How did such a strange thing come about?
12. The sounds of their voices gradually died away.
13. I can't make out what she means in this telegram.
14. You have made out this cheque incorrectly.
15. They are taking on more workers at that factory.
16. Our sales have fallen off recently.
17. An usher stood at the door giving out programs.
18. He will turn over all his property to his children.
19. As soon as the rain lets up, we will leave.
20. You must put an end to such foolishness.
21. She is trying to stir up trouble among the other students.
22. We were all taken in by his smooth manner of talking.

Friday, 15 February 2013

E10 writing process




PROCESS
1.Analyze- 6 QUESTIONS, TOPIC, PERSUASIVE-argument

2.Brainstorm
getting ideas flowing, priming the pump
creative
-MIND MAPPING
key words, visual organization, web, hub

-COLUMNS, LISTS

-FREEWRITING

3.Outline
TIME, SPACE, IMPORTANCE
structure


4.Rough Copy- sentences
simple, compound, complex
express thoughts clearly
awkward, not authentic grammar
familiarity with English


5.Edit/ Proofread
svagr
vt
vf
wf
punc

6.Great Copy

Thursday, 14 February 2013

EF2/3 compound sentences


6.      Jack lost his leather jacket, so he needs a new one.
7.      Tom had no money, so Jack lent him $10.
8.      We have to leave in ten minutes, so I will be late for my appointment.
I will be late for my appointment, so we have to leave in ten minutes.
We have to leave in ten minutes, or I will be late for my appointment.

COMPOUND SENTENCE- fanboys
                                                            yet, for, nor- low frequency
                                                            SOBA- high frequency


1.      high
The quality of the clothing is high, but the price is pretty low.

2.      market
I went to the farmers’ market, and it was a zoo.

3.      idea
I told my wife my idea, but she didn’t like it.
She had a great business idea, so she told her boss.

4.      future
He wants to be a doctor in the future, but it will be a lot of hard work.

5.      offer
May wants to buy that house, so she made an offer.
I offered to help him, but he didn’t need my help.

E10 sent comb exercises


kernel
complex sentence- adverb cl. at beginning
1.    While they were shopping for a gift for their mother, France and Monika saw a display of refinished antique furniture in the mall.
2.    One particular chair caught their eye and gave them an idea.
One particular chair which caught their eye gave them an idea.

COMMAS AROUND ADJECTIVE CLAUSES
restrictive and non-restrictive clauses
essential and non-essential clauses

Canada, which has ten provinces, is a large country.
non-essential= without it, the sentence would still make sense

My sister who is a nurse plays volleyball. 2 sisters
My sister, who is a nurse, plays volleyball. 1 sister

Joe’s mother, who is retired, likes to play mah-jong.

Vancouver, which is in BC, is a nice city.


One particular eye-catching chair gave them an idea.

3.    They decided to look for a chair to refinish because their mom likes antiques.
4.    They looked in some shops on a side street not far from the mall; eventually, they found two delicate chairs (they knew would look super in the family’s breakfast nook).
5.    The price was reasonable, so they bought both chairs and left, talking excitedly about how to restore them.

IKEA English
They bought both chairs because the price was reasonable; after they left, they were talking excitedly about how they could restore them.

He walked down the street, singing a song.

commas= personal, style grammar

Wednesday, 6 February 2013

EF 2/3 sentence exercises


1.     Do you watch a lot of TV?
Does your son watch a lot of TV?
Do your children watch a lot of TV?

2.     The Prime Minister shook hands with me.
3.     Skating, snowboarding, and hockey are fun to do in winter.
4.     My sisters have interesting jobs.
Nurses have interesting jobs.
5.     Did you see Sarah at the party last night?
Were you at the party last night?
Did I see you at the party last night?
6.     Your answer surprised me.
7.     Dancers have to keep in good shape.
Athletes have to keep in good shape.
8.     The TV show was wonderful.
The view was wonderful.
9.     Are you going to join us tonight?
10.                        That bird is very unusual.
          That man is very unusual.

Tuesday, 5 February 2013

E10 Expectations for sentence writing


EXPECTATIONS FOR SENTENCE WRITING FOR E10

Sentences- variety, styles, types

clause=subject and a verb
two kinds of clauses      -main clause (independent clause)
-subordinate clause (dependent clause)
                                               



**simple sentence- independent clause, main clause
subject+verb         “He is reading the newspaper.”
ss+v                     “Jan and John are playing football.”
s+vv
ss+vv                   “Mark and Tom ate pizza and watched the game.”
s+vvv
sss+v


**compound- two independent clauses, two main clauses
svsv
coordinating conjunctions       , FANBOYS= for and nor but or yet so
                   “I am wearing a sweater, for it is cold.”
                   “She likes dogs, yet but I like cats.”
LOW FREQUENCY
                  
                                                          , SOBA=so or buy and
                   “It is cold, so I am wearing a sweater.”
HIGH FREQUENCY

; semicolon SAME AS , SOBA , FANBOYS
“I am wearing a sweater; it is cold.”
“It is cold; I am wearing a sweater.”
“It is cold; therefore, I am wearing a sweater.”

; semicolon LOW FREQUENCY
“It is cold.  Therefore, I am wearing a sweater.”
                   HIGH FREQUENCY

“Transitional Terms”





**complex sentences- main clause+subordinate clause
                                      independent clause+ dependent clause

subordinate clauses


**adverb clauses  because if when

I am wearing a sweater (because it is cold). Why?
(If you want), you can go swimming. Situation?
The kids do their homework after they have supper.
      
KEY
time - when, while, whenever, before, after, until
        place - where, wherever
        degree - than, as ____ as _______
        reason, purpose or cause - because, since
        condition - if, unless
        concession - although, even though, though


**adjective clauses- that, who, which

          adjective describes a noun
          “a big green coat”
          “the expensive leather chair”
          “the angry dog”

The expensive leather chair (that was on sale) is nice.
My big green coat (that has the fur hood) is very beautiful.
The angry dog (that was barking at me) is scary.
that=subject pronoun

The expensive leather chair (that I bought) is nice.
My big green coat (that my sister gave me) is very beautiful.
The angry dog (that I saw) was scary.
that=object pronoun, can be omitted AUTHENTIC

who
My sister (who is a nurse) plays volleyball.
My sister (whom I was talking to) plays volleyball.

who/whom?
whom         When? object pronoun
                   REAL ANSWER (SECRET)   Never.

“To whom it may concern,”



noun clauses

feel, think, know, believe, say

that “I think (that it will rain today).”
          “She felt that he was lying.”
          “He knows that he has to work harder.”
          “Jon believes that he will do well in the race.”


Very useful verb forms

verb tenses
“I am be live in Vancouver.” X
“He watching TV.” X

verb tense             present                 past            future

simple                            YES                     YES            YES
progressive           YES                     YES            YES
perfect                            YES                     NO              NO
perfect prog                   YES                     NO              NO




***modals

Modal         Meaning                                   Example
can              to express ability            I can speak English very well.
can              to request permission              Can I go to Foundations 4?
could           to express ability           I could help you tomorrow.
could           to express possibility              She could be an Olympian.
may             to express possibility               I may be late for class.
may             to request permission              May I take the test again, please?
might to express possibility              She might call you later.
must            to express obligation               I must leave at 4 o’clock.
must           to express strong belief  You must be kidding!
should         to give advice                          You should go to the doctor.
will             to show future                         I will not drive my car today.
would         to request or offer           Would you prefer a tea or coffee?
would         in if-sentences                          If I were you, I would complain.

LOWER FREQUENCY
had better- should
have to- must
have got to- must
need to- must
ought to- should
used to “He used to play football.
be able to- can
be going to- will
be supposed to- should



**phrasal verbs
prepositions- ~75, idiomatic,  meaning is in the culture not the
dictionary

talk “to”

http://www.englishclub.com/vocabulary/phrasal-verbs-list.htm
http://www.learn-english-today.com/phrasal-verbs/phrasal-verb-list.htm

EF2/3 Grammar Overview


1.     You can have an apple or an orange. (simple sentence)

2.     You can have an apple, or you can have an orange. (compound sentence)

FANBOYS- coordinating conjunctions
for and nor but or yet so
SOBA-so or but and

I like cats, but she likes dogs.


3.     The English teacher began talk right at 10:20.
infinitive- to talk
The English teacher began to talk right at 10:20.
gerund- talking
The English teacher began talking right at 10:20.

4.     The small children is playing in the park.
subject verb agreement
The small child is playing in the park.
The small children are playing in the park.

I is am happy.

5.     They are going of to see a movie.
preposition- heart of English, meaning is not in dictionary, meaning is in the culture

talk to
talk with


6.     Can I have your old phone if you buy that new one?
sentence fragment

7.     My coat is in the park by the tree over there.

8.     He can go to Science World.
modals- modal auxiliaries

9.     He has a coat.  The coat is red.
sentence combining
He has a red coat.

10.                        My aunt was a good student when she was a child.
verb tense

11.                        His daughter is a five years girl.
          His daughter is five years old.
          His daughter is a five-year-old.
a book store
a computer store
a three-hour movie a three hours movie

12.                        She asks him to help her fold the laundry.
          causative verb
13.                        The boxes of photographs are stored in the attic.
          passive voice

14.                        Because it’s supposed to rain today, we can’t go to the         park.
          It’s supposed to rain today.

15.                        She wants to go, but she has to work. Maybe she’ll be           late.
          run-on sentence

16.                        This is the happiest day of my life.
          adjective form- superlative

basic           comparative                   superlative
happy                   happier                          happiest
big                        bigger                             biggest
beautiful               more beautiful                most beautiful
good           better                    best
bad                       worse                             worst

17.                        Shelley, my best friend, has two dogs.
appositive