Today’s Agenda
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Essay work- from homework
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Sentence combining
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Quiz7- adjective clauses (final quiz) END OF
CLASS (last 25m)
Friday
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“Self-Assessment Reflection” Week 8 FINAL ONE
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Return Quiz7- Friday or Monday
Optional RW for bonus point
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Essay- pass-in (full class)
Monday
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Review
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Return everything
Tuesday, June 24
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Optional replacement test and/or quiz
Replacement test – paragraph new topic
Replacement quiz- mix of six sentence types
and clauses
Wednesday, June 25
Final day- non-instructional day
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Final marks and meetings
Presentations
x/10
Email x/1
Check x/1
Writing x/4
Spoken x/4
Sentence combining
-next level for sentence writing
REVIEW Simple, compound, and complex sentences
Use this knowledge and these skills
“Sentence Combining Sheet 1”
1. The
object looks long.
The object looks thin.
The object measures about 8 inches in length.
The object looks long. KERNEL
Find new information. Eliminate repetition.
The object looks thin.
The object looks long and thin.
Find new information. Eliminate repetition.
The object measures about 8 inches
in length.
The object looks long and thin.
measures about 8 inches in length.
POSSIBLE SOLUTION
The object looks long, thin, and measures about 8 inches in length. XXX
Parallelism- words in a series have to be the same kind of
word
long (adj)
thin (adj)
measures (v)
POSSIBLE SOLUTION
The object looks long and thin, and it measures about 8 inches
in length. COMPOUND
The object looks long and thin; also, it measures about 8
inches in length. COMPOUND
The object looks
long and thin and measures about 8 inches
in length. SIMPLE SVV
The long and thin-looking object measures about 8 inches in length. SIMPLE SV
The object which/that looks long and thin measures
about 8 inches in length. COMPLEX- ADJ CL
Sentence combining – simple, compound and complex sentence
structures
Sentence combining exercises- beginner-level up to college-level
Beginner-level
Kai has a hat.
The hat is red.
The hat is for baseball.
SOLUTIONS
Kai has a red baseball hat. Kai has a red hat for baseball. Kai
has a red hat that he uses for baseball.
Kai has a hat, and the hat is red; in fact, the hat is for
baseball. OVERWRITTEN
HIGHER LEVEL
1. Canada
accepts people.
The people are from other countries.
The countries are troubled.
The trouble is political.
What is your feeling? Simple? Compound? Complex?
Canada accepts people.
The people are from other countries.
The countries are troubled.
The trouble is political.
Canada accepts people from other countries that have political
troubles. COMPLEX- ADJ CL
2. The
object that has many flat sides appears rounded, and its diameter measures
about 1/8 inch. COMPOUND-COMPLEX
The object that whose diameter
measures about 1/8 inch appears rounded with many flat sides.
The object has many flat sides, but it appears
rounded with a diameter that measures
about 1/8 inch. COMPOUND COMPLEX
The object has many flat sides but appears
rounded with a diameter that measures
about 1/8 inch. SVV COMPLEX ADJ CL
The object appears rounded and has many flat sides with a diameter
that measures about 1/8 inch.
The object appears
rounded and has many flat sides with a diameter
of about 1/8 inch. SIMPLE SVV
3. It
comes in many colours outside and many colours inside, but usually the outside
is yellow while usually the inside is greyish black.
Eliminate repetition
It comes in many colours outside and inside, but usually the
outside is yellow while the inside is greyish black.
It comes in many colours inside and outside; usually, the outside
is yellow while the inside is greyish black.
; TRANS,
It comes in many colours outside and inside; while it
is usually yellow outside and greyish black inside.
SV, SOBA SV.
SV; SV.
SV; TRANS, SV.
It comes in many colours which/that are usually yellow
outside and greyish black inside.
Quiz7
Write a sentence with an adjective clause for each.
1.
who give
2.
that tomorrow
3.
that free
4.
which special
5.
where buy
6.
who help
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