Thursday, 11 January 2024

EF5 Wr567 Class 33

 

Good afternoon, everyone.

We will get started at 12:00

 

Today’s agenda

·      Continue sentence types- adjective clauses

·      Continue process/expository writing

·      Continue review of verb tenses- present perfect

 

Friday

·      Continue sentence types- adjective clauses

·      Test#5 this week – process paragraph- probably Friday

 

Monday, Jan 15

·      Quiz#5- adjective clauses

·      Begin descriptive writing

 

Tuesday, Jan 16

·      Descriptive writing, group

·      Sentence combining

 

Wednesday, Jan 17

·      Decriptive writing, presentation

·      Sentence combining

 

Thursday, Jan 18

·       

 

Friday, Jan 19

·      Begin essay work

 

Presentations- individual presentations

Essays- five-paragraph essay

Replacement quiz or test- last few days

Final spoken mark – x/10  x/10 

 

Final week

Monday

·      Essay work

 

 

Tuesday

·      Essay work

·       

Wednesday

·      Essay to pass in

·       

 

Thursday

·      Replacement quiz or test

·       

 

Friday- final day, January 26th

·      Marks day

·      One-on-one conferences

 

Back on February 5th.

 

 

Arctic Outflow Warning- cold weather warning

Wind chill values: Near minus 20.  -20

Standing in the wind is much colder than standing out of the wind.

Hazard: Risk of frostbite and hypothermia.

frostbite- your skin freezes and can be damaged permanently

hypothermia- your core temperature drops below 36-37C

hypo- under

hypodermic needle – under the skin

derma- skin

dermatologist- skin doctor

intramuscular needle

 

If you go out tonight, wear a hat and gloves.

We lose most of our heat through our head.

 

snow

flakes

flurries- very light snow

driving snow- snow and heavy wind

hail- frozen ice pellets

freezing rain- superchilled rain that freezes when it hits the ground

silver thaw- trees are covered with ice

In Vancouver, we don’t often get cold, clear winter days.

 

slush- wet snow on the ground

black ice- thin layer of ice on the road or sidewalk, hard to see

Your car will slide or skid on the ice.

 

car accidents-

rear-ender

sideswipe

head-on

t-bone

A small accident with little damage is called a fender-bender.

 

Their car flipped and rolled three times.

 

saffron-

cayenne pepper- hot pepper, very spicy

 

 

 

who-people

that-things, animals

which- special things, unique things

 

EVEN DEEPER LEVEL:

Two ways to write an adj cl:

 

I was talking to the woman who is my sister’s friend.

The woman who I was talking to is my sister’s friend.

 

Similar information expressed in two different ways

 

These adj cl are different from each other.

 

I was talking to the woman who is my sister’s friend. ‘who’ is the subject, subject pronoun

 

The woman who I was talking to is my sister’s friend. ‘I’ is the subject, ‘who’ is the object, object pronoun

 

You can have a subject pronoun or an object pronoun.

 

 

When you have an object pronoun, you have choices!

Choice#1

The woman who I was talking to is my sister’s friend. object pronoun

 

Choice#2

The woman who I was talking to is my sister’s friend. OMIT the ‘who’

The woman I was talking to is my sister’s friend.

MOST AUTHENTIC SOUNDING- WHAT AN ENGLISH SPEAKER WOULD DO

 

Choice#3

The woman whom I was talking to is my sister’s friend.

‘whom’ object pronoun in an adjective clause

formal, very unusual, authentic English speakers do not bother with ‘whom’.

-sounds fake, pretentious, not commonly used

 

To whom were you talking? SOUNDS FAKE AND PRETENTIOUS

Who were you talking to? SOUNDS AUTHENTIC

 

*Choice#1

The woman who I was talking to is my sister’s friend. object pronoun

*Choice#2

The woman I was talking to is my sister’s friend.

Choice#3

The woman whom I was talking to is my sister’s friend.

Choice#4- very very formal

The woman to whom I was talking is my sister’s friend.

 

FREE ADVICE: Forget about ‘whom’. Nobody uses it.

THE EXCEPTION:

To whom it may concern,

 

Subject and object pronouns:

Exercise A:

1.    Louis knows the woman. The woman is meeting us at the airport.

Louis knows the woman who is meeting us at the airport. SV of adj cl?

Louis knows the woman who is meeting us at the airport. subject pronoun- we can’t change the pronoun

 

1.    Louis knows the woman. The woman is meeting us at the airport.

The woman who Louis knows is meeting us at the airport. object pronoun – We have choices.

Choice#1

The woman who Louis knows is meeting us at the airport.

Choice#2

The woman Louis knows is meeting us at the airport.

Choice#3

The woman whom Louis knows is meeting us at the airport.

 

3.     The bench was wet. I sat on it.

The bench that I sat on it was wet. SV

The bench that I sat on was wet. object pronoun

Choice#1

The bench that I sat on was wet.

Choice#2

The bench I sat on was wet.

Choice#3

The bench which I sat on was wet. special/unique

 

The bench was wet. I sat on it.

I sat on the bench that/which was wet.

 

I sat on the wet bench. SIMPLE SV

The bench was wet, but I sat on it. COMPOUND

The bench was wet; however, I sat on it. COMPOUND

I sat on the bench that was wet. COMPLEX- adj cl

I sat on the bench even though it was wet. COMPLEX- adv cl

I didn’t know that the bench was wet, so I sat on it. COMPLEX- noun clause

 

Try the A exercises for homework.

We can share them tomorrow.

If you have time, please email a few to me by 7.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Homework: Think of something that you can teach how to do. It could be a recipe, how to fix something, something about computer, dance move, could be anything. We’ll start to put together a process tomorrow.

 

 

Process Writing

 

 

 

 

 

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