Tuesday, 26 November 2024

WI567 Class 11

 

There is an intermittent disconnect between the laptop and the projector. I don’t know if it is the HDMI cable or the HDMI port.

I should spray the port with contact cleaner or compressed air.

 

Today’s Agenda

·      Attendance

·      Return Quiz2

Optional RW for a bonus point

·      Continue paragraphs

Brainstorming on the topics

Test#1 Wednesday

·      Parallelism

 

Wednesday

·      Read aloud paragraphs from homework

·      Continue with sentence types- COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSES

 

Thursday

·      Continue with sentence types- COMPLEX- ADVERB CLAUSES

·      End of class (last 45m)

Test#1- Write a paragraph of at least 150 words (6-10 sentences) on the following topic.

Everyday topic

 

postpone(v) delay for a short time

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Quiz#2

Lined ruled paper

Devices away

Doublespace

Full name and class top right corner

Write a compound sentence for each.

Pass in by 12:29

 

COMPOUND SENTENCES

SV, SOBA SV.  , so   , or   , but   , and

SV; SV.  ; semicolon

SV; TRANS, SV.

 

SIMPLE SENTENCES with ;

SV. TRANS, SV.

 

1.    so                           project

Mai has a new project, so she has to do some overtime.

 

2.    however               neighbour

We have to move to new apartment; however, we like our neighbors.

We have to move to new apartment. However, we like our neighbors.

 

3.    also                       create

The restaurant made a nice pasta; also, they created exceptional desserts.

4.    on the other hand meet

5.    nevertheless       complain

6.    as a result            celebration

 

Optional rewrite for a bonus point. Give that to me today or first thing tomorrow.

 

 

My old phone is dying; I will have to use it until I receive my/a new one.

 

VF

complain(v) The woman complained to the restaurant manager about the service.

complaint(n) The woman made a complaint to the restaurant manager about the service.

He left a complaint on the website.

 

My tenants were complain about the heating. vf

FIX

My tenants complained about the heating. simple past

My tenants were complaining about the heating. past progressive

 

My neighbors are so friendly. ww- too casual, good for talking

FIX

My neighbors are very friendly.

My neighbors are quite/extremely/not very friendly.

 

The dog is so cute. casual talking, not for school writing

The dog is so cute that I want to get my own dog.

ADVERB CLAUSE  so...that

He was so happy that he was dan cing around the room.

It is so cold today that I wore layers.

 

I dressed like a cabbage. poetry- simile

ENGLISH I dressed in layers.

simile- comparison between two unlike things using the words ‘like’ or ‘as’

He is as tall as a tree/giraffe.

She is as busy as a bee/beaver.

He is a stubborn as a mule.

She is as pretty as a flower/picture.

He is as thin as a dime/pole/chopstick/monkey.

He is as thin as a toothpick with the wood shaved off.

Her grandmother is as deaf as a post.

He is as wise as an owl.

She is as blind as a bat.

IDIOM I am as blind as a bat without my glasses.

He has eyes like an eagle.

 

Mother- I have eyes in the back of my head.

 

His New Year’s celebration was a blast; therefore, I drank too much.

IDIOM was a blast, is a hoot-  a lot of fun

The party was a blast.

Joe is a hoot. He is a lot of fun, a very fun person

 

fun(adj)- a good time, enjoyable

funny(adj)- homourous, laughing

 

Swimming is fun but not funny.

Mohammed is a funny guy; he likes to make jokes.

 

I have poor posture. This funny chair helps.

He slouches.

Don’t slouch! Stand up straight!

 

ART- articles

a, an, the

a-    consonant sounds

an- vowel sounds

 

a car   an apple

a school   an octopus

 

hour, university, honest

 

I’ll be home in an hour.

a horse

 

She is studying in a university.

you-niversity

 

He has an umbrella.

 

She is an honest person.

She is a happy person.

 

We went to an RVA meeting.

You were at a VSB meeting.

 

a/an/the

the- specific thing that we both know

a/an- we dont’ both know it

We are in the classroom right now.

 

IDIOM a meet-cute story They met in a coffee shop.

 

 

 

 

 

Websites about article usage:

https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/grammar/using_articles.html

https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/grammar/a1-a2-grammar/articles-a-an-the

 

 

Great Paragraphs name?

 

“What is a Paragraph”

 

Topic sentence- addresses the topic directly

-         1.gives the topic

-         2. gives the controlling idea

 

Braille- topic

special system, write and read, blind people- contolling idea

 

One paragraph is about one idea – one topic,one controlling idea

 

The supporiting sentences only address the topic sentence

 

 

WRITING PROCESS

PREWRITING- planning stage

1.Read the question. Read every word. Read it ten times. Make sure you know what the teacher wants you to do.

2.Brainstorm- list, group spitball, mindmap

-creates a wordbank

-vocab begets vocab

-passive vocab bubbles to the surface of our conciousness

3.Organize your ideas: time, space, importance

TIME ORG- narrative, process writing

SPACE ORG- descriptive writing

IMPORTANCE- persuasive writing

 

WRITING- sentence writing stage

4. Rough copy/draft- TS, SSs, CS

Topic sentence, supporting sentences, concluding sentence

5. Proofread and edit- check for errors.

You know where your errors usually are.

sp, vt, vf, punc, agr, wf, etc, organization, frag,

6.Rewrite it into a good draft if you have time. If you don’t have time, pass in your legible rough draft.

 

**Activity 2 Writing Practice

Think of something that is unique to your country, language or family. Write a short paragraph about the topic.

 

Follow our process

Prewriting

Step1 Read the question.

Step2 Brainstorm ideas and vocab.

Step3 Organize

Wriitng

Step 4 First draft

Step 5 Proofread and edit

Step 6 Good draft or submit rough draft

 

get far away from the topics, drift from the main idea- going off-topic

 

ORGANIZATION – TIME, SPACE or IMPORTANCE (usually put the most important thing last)

 

 

A blown fuse caused the incident.

These days, most electrical panels use breakers.

 

This lit the fuse for the protest to begin.

 

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