Good morning.
We will get started at 8:30.
Summer school- Composition 11 / Lit Studies 11, 8:30-12
It will be 90% the same as this course.
The schedule is up on the website: July 4- August 5.
Summer Break – August 6 - September 6?
Today’s Agenda:
• Return Quiz#2
Name
Example sentences
Present perfect
• Narrative writing work- read some aloud
Wednesday
• Writing Process – ‘Prewriting and Writing for Paragraphs”
• Narrative writing work- read aloud
• Passive/active voice
• Continue with adjective clauses
• HW Prepare for Test#2- narrative writing
Thursday
• Test #2 Narrative paragraph
• Begin definition writing
Friday
• Quiz 3- adjective clauses
Quiz#2 – adverb clauses
1. since celebrate(v)
2. unless lay off(v- phrasal verb verb+preposition)
3. in order to establish(v)
4. even if advertise(v)
5. even though recognize(v)
6. until exhausted(v, adj)
Word forms!
establish(v) establishment(n)
advertise(v) advertisement(n)
recognize(v) recognition(n)
Edit and correct sentences.
A big concern- people’s familiarity with real English
Authentic English, everyday phrasing
How do English speakers say things?
Lack of comfort/ease with expressing your ideas in English.
Next big challenge! Making your English sound authentic.
even if- something might happen
even though- something happened
Joe will buy an advertisement for his restaurant in the newspaper even if it is expensive.
Mary is happy that she moved to Canada even though it has been difficult.
Mary will move to Canada even if her family doesn’t want her to.
Mary will move to Canada even though her family doesn’t want her to.
Examples of problem sentences
-grammatical issues
-lack of familiarity with English, do not convey meaning clearly
1. We was establish a small company in order to have better future.
We established a small company in order to have a better future.
2. Even if I works hard make my advertise so cute; however, my friend don’t like it.
Even if I work hard to make my advertisement very cute, my friends still don’t like it.
3. In order to establish the relationship inside the class, school have given us different kind of event to enjoy, such as music competition.
In order to establish a friendly rapport/community/sense of belonging/group spirit inside the class, the school has given us different kinds of events to enjoy, such as music competitions.
REALITY: We have to struggle to find the right word!
4. This new product can’t sell even if we get advertise everywhere.
This new product won’t sell even if we put/place/post advertising/advertisements everywhere.
5. We will go to winery unless you lay off alcohol.
We will go to a/the winery unless you are laying off alcohol right now.
lay off – stop using, stop doing something
Marco is trying to lay off the cigarettes. He is trying to quit.
6. In order to finish my career, I have to stablish new study habits.
In order to start my career, I have to establish new study habits.
In order to finish studying for/ preparing for my career, I have to establish new study habits.
In order to accomplish my career goals, I have to…
phrasing- How do we say things?
I have some personal goals that I want to accomplish this year. For example, I want to finish up at South Hill and get a new job.
finish- finish up (sounds more casual, friendly)
I am just finishing up here. Could you wait for five minutes?
7. You need to work really hard in order to establish you goal.
You need to work really hard in order to establish your goal.
your – possessive pronoun
me my
she her
you your
8. Brian is still working at London Drug unless the company lay off him.
Brian probably is/should be still working at London Drugs unless the company laid him off.
lay NAME off Cisco laid Joe off last year. Cisco will lay 100 people off next month.
put NAME up Sarah picked her sister up.
Nasrin is a very detail-oriented person.
Shira is an ideas person.
dyslexia – cognitive problem, challenge
9. The manager of Alibaba’s company is about to lay off some of their employees off unless the pandemic will not affect their company.
The manager of Alibaba is about to lay off some of their employees off because the pandemic impacted their bottom line.
IDIOM- bottom line – profit or loss, in the black or in the red
10. The new established university was advertised on the bill board even if it is not enough known college.
The newly-established university was advertised on the bill board because it is not a well-known college.
11. You won’t be lay off unless your selling achievement were the last one for half a year.
You won’t be laid off unless your sales record/numbers were the lowest for the previous half a year/six months.
She will not get laid off after all. passive voice
The company laid her off. active voice
She was laid off by the company. passive voice
12. I was not exhausted until I finished 10 km running.
I was exhausted after I finished running 10 km.
Marta works until she is exhausted. COMPLEX
13. I will be back school unless I was laid off.
I will come back to school if I get laid off.
14. The shop owner still feel hard to get new customers even if he advertised on local media for weeks.
The shop owner feels that it is still hard to get new customers even though he advertised on local media for weeks.
15. We celebrated our ABC culture since we move in to Canada.
We have celebrated our ABC culture since we moved to Canada.
present perfect- I will teach this soon. Please remind me.
We have been very happy since we moved into our new apartment.
FIX SOME OF THESE FOR HOMEWORK. EMAIL A FEW TO ME.
FIX – PROOFREAD and EDIT
Good challenge, like a puzzle.
*It is often easier to see other people’s mistakes more than our own.
16. I still don’t smoke cigarettes even though I do recognize my craving less than before.
17. Unless the company lay off for the worker, the worker will find a job easily.
18. Mike established a car for the disability people in order to he became very famous.
19. Her mom was still doing the dishes unless she was not lay off.
20. In order to improve your English, you need to establish the vocabularies though the reading.
21. Even if Maria sent a lot of money for an advertising, nobody know about her business.
22. I don’t like to change my job unless I lay off from this job.
23. You can not grow crops on exhausted land until the land rebuild its life.
24. You need to establish a rule in order to make progress.
25. You need to recognize she don’t like you even though this is not going to stop to like her.
26. Advertise each of your moves, even if you lose.
27. I won’t talk to you until you give back my ring, I am exhausted so I will be gone to sleep.
THINGS TO REMEMBER:
- clauses, sentence styles
- verb tenses, voice
- punctuation
- spelling
- vocabulary and word forms
- phrasing
We are on our way!
Tomorrow
Test#2 narrative paragraph
Party#2
Topic sentence
Supporting sentences
Concluding sentence
(150-200 ww approx.) a little bit longer is ok if you need the space, not three pages
Use the scissors with your story. Keep in only what is essential to the story.
Like a filmmaker- scissors
Tell a story, ADD illustrate a point, teach a simple lesson
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